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Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Quite cleaver wording and so very relevant to todays news. The syllables flow so smoothly and it's accomodated by a very simple but very suitable picture. That ties in with the title and body of the poem. Good presentation.
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Quite cleaver wording and so very relevant to todays news. The syllables flow so smoothly and it's accomodated by a very simple but very suitable picture. That ties in with the title and body of the poem. Good presentation.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2018
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
A wonderful way to spread the news. Your political piece on global warming is an eye-opening one. Your 5-7-5 format is nicely done. A compelling entry for the contest. Good luck.
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A wonderful way to spread the news. Your political piece on global warming is an eye-opening one. Your 5-7-5 format is nicely done. A compelling entry for the contest. Good luck.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2018
Comment from kiwijenny
Why are chopsticks weather tools...? The eternal question.
Is it the billions of bamboo chopped down that cause this havocy climate?
But that's a renewable resource.... is this trying to Chop-stick it to the man?
Hmmm need to think.
God bless
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Why are chopsticks weather tools...? The eternal question.
Is it the billions of bamboo chopped down that cause this havocy climate?
But that's a renewable resource.... is this trying to Chop-stick it to the man?
Hmmm need to think.
God bless
Comment Written 27-Sep-2018
Comment from Pantygynt
Well it is his standard answer. If it comes from China slap a tariff on it. He certainly had a go at the Chinese yesterday. But of course that was yesterday he could be all lovey dovey today. Remember 'Rocket Man'.
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Well it is his standard answer. If it comes from China slap a tariff on it. He certainly had a go at the Chinese yesterday. But of course that was yesterday he could be all lovey dovey today. Remember 'Rocket Man'.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2018
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
He he he, this made me smile and Trump will slap a tariff on anything that moves? When it comes to climatic change he is hiding under the table! Ha ha ha, love Dolly x
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He he he, this made me smile and Trump will slap a tariff on anything that moves? When it comes to climatic change he is hiding under the table! Ha ha ha, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Sep-2018
Comment from rjuselius
indeed. I still cannot understand why Trump was elected. I guess voters voted with a feeling which seems to create an antirational climate. Why?
however, your poem hits the chord.
Thanks for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings and a hearty hug!
Rebekka x
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indeed. I still cannot understand why Trump was elected. I guess voters voted with a feeling which seems to create an antirational climate. Why?
however, your poem hits the chord.
Thanks for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings and a hearty hug!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 27-Sep-2018
Comment from meeshu
an attept at sardonic poetry. I think I get it, although I might be offended if I were Chinese or a snowflake progressive. good luck..
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an attept at sardonic poetry. I think I get it, although I might be offended if I were Chinese or a snowflake progressive. good luck..
Comment Written 27-Sep-2018
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent 5-7-5 for the contest
Those chop sticks are definitely the problem
Think of all the wood used to make them over the last thousand years.
Chop, chop, more tariffs
Well done
Good luck in the contest
RS
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This is an excellent 5-7-5 for the contest
Those chop sticks are definitely the problem
Think of all the wood used to make them over the last thousand years.
Chop, chop, more tariffs
Well done
Good luck in the contest
RS
Comment Written 26-Sep-2018
Comment from Earl Corp
I understand three line poems are hard to write so one makes sense, which you did. While I get why you might think it's a satire piece. I found it to be more offensive than satirical.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2018
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I understand three line poems are hard to write so one makes sense, which you did. While I get why you might think it's a satire piece. I found it to be more offensive than satirical.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2018
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Oh? Offensive how? Climate change is a myth? You like Trump? If this had been a satire AGAINST the liberal elite would you feel the same way about the WRITING? :))