The Truth
Saying it like it is.7 total reviews
Comment from Marie Werner
I love this tongue-in-cheek poem. What is absolute truth anyway? A very creative use of the writing prompt.
Good luck in the contest and thanks for posting!
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2018
I love this tongue-in-cheek poem. What is absolute truth anyway? A very creative use of the writing prompt.
Good luck in the contest and thanks for posting!
Comment Written 27-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2018
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Absolute truth? I don't really know. :) thank you Marie.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Okay, so I absolutely had to laugh out loud here (hope that's okay...), but this was great! :) :) The subtleties cannot be missed...and you met those insane requirements of this contest to boot -- great job!! :) ;)
Thank you so much for sharing and good luck in the contest!! :)
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
Okay, so I absolutely had to laugh out loud here (hope that's okay...), but this was great! :) :) The subtleties cannot be missed...and you met those insane requirements of this contest to boot -- great job!! :) ;)
Thank you so much for sharing and good luck in the contest!! :)
Comment Written 25-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
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Thank you Yvette. You laugh! Great! I succeeded in my mission. :)
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks that the poet as a scribe does write the absolute truth only; this fulfills the requirements of the contest; wish you good luck; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
This speaks that the poet as a scribe does write the absolute truth only; this fulfills the requirements of the contest; wish you good luck; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 25-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
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Thank you Al. Sometimes I just colorize the truth.
Comment from Nanny 6
Love it! I like a person who's honest. Your poem shows truth without any excuses. It's the only valid thing to write. Who needs to buy friends with a pen? Good job, and I wish you the best of luck in the contest!
Judy
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
Love it! I like a person who's honest. Your poem shows truth without any excuses. It's the only valid thing to write. Who needs to buy friends with a pen? Good job, and I wish you the best of luck in the contest!
Judy
Comment Written 25-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
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Nanny I'm not a saint. I'm just crazy. :)
Comment from aryr
Good luck in the contest. I do believe you definitely met the criteria indicate in the contest prompt. I certainly appreciated your narrative note, music is absolutely great isn't it? Thanks for sharing Jose.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
Good luck in the contest. I do believe you definitely met the criteria indicate in the contest prompt. I certainly appreciated your narrative note, music is absolutely great isn't it? Thanks for sharing Jose.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
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Thanks Alie. I was feeling a little music crazy. :)
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Comment from Kelly Hanna
I think that as writers we must all be a bit narcissistic. We do expect that people will value our writings as much as we do. I guess that as a writer we write our own truths. Great topic.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
I think that as writers we must all be a bit narcissistic. We do expect that people will value our writings as much as we do. I guess that as a writer we write our own truths. Great topic.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
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Thank you Kelly. I wrote this on the spur of the moment.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written fifteen word poem about the truth. We all have our own perception of what is the truth in our opinion. Someone else may have another perception of the truth on the same subject.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
A very well-written fifteen word poem about the truth. We all have our own perception of what is the truth in our opinion. Someone else may have another perception of the truth on the same subject.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
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Thank you Sandra. You are right, we see truth our way.