Comment from Artasylum

Excellent

Hey... great job on the format you needed to follow... so... great job on this write. Ahh the wedding day and oh just one problem... thanks so much and looking forward. yours, diana

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018

Thanks for the review. I thought it funny to compare a high maintenance girl's wedding day compared to a tomboy that does not put much store into the frills and pomp.. Cheers, j

reply by Artasylum on 25-Sep-2018

Yes... she was a bit prissy and frankly... thanks kiddo.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Good job, Mystery Author, with your contest entry. Your words flow naturally and tell a good story. The art is perfect for your words, too. The required words are used well. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018

Thanks for the review Jan. I could just imagine a high maintenance girl and a tomboy getting ready for their wedding, Quite a difference I would think. The tomboy is thinking of her love and snorkling in the Bahamas, while the other is so worried about the frills, Cheers, j