A Bit Passed; Half
Philosophy, life, my Muse38 total reviews
Comment from Boogienights
There are so many ideas in this fantastic poem, I feel I must read it through again, so I don't miss anything. I like how much joy is in this, especially about writing...I feel the same way. Thanks so much for sharing. :)
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2021
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There are so many ideas in this fantastic poem, I feel I must read it through again, so I don't miss anything. I like how much joy is in this, especially about writing...I feel the same way. Thanks so much for sharing. :)
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2021
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Thanks I appreciate your review sorry for the delay
Comment from Bluesatinbutterfly
I was carried, by your words, right to the end of this poem. With my short attention span, low boredom threshold and rat-in-a-trap mind, that is no small feat. Thank you.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2021
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I was carried, by your words, right to the end of this poem. With my short attention span, low boredom threshold and rat-in-a-trap mind, that is no small feat. Thank you.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much for the wonderful six star review sorry for the delay in responding and backlogged thank you thank you thank you
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
You have written a really interesting poem here, the word play is amazing. One part really stood out for me, the point on choice....
"If you choose not to decide, you still have made a choice"
That is so true. Choice comes into everything we do, or don't do. As with the rest of your poem, it's your journey and you chose to be free! I enjoyed reading this. Well done. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2021
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You have written a really interesting poem here, the word play is amazing. One part really stood out for me, the point on choice....
"If you choose not to decide, you still have made a choice"
That is so true. Choice comes into everything we do, or don't do. As with the rest of your poem, it's your journey and you chose to be free! I enjoyed reading this. Well done. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2021
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Thanks Sandra I appreciate the review sorry for the delay
Comment from Susan Newell
This poem is spectacular and deserves multiple readings, because it is so jam-packed with concepts of maturity, faith, self-identity, creativity and on and on. You are such a precise writer that I hesitate to ask, but in the following lines, did you really mean "feet" as a reference to poetry, or "feat" as a skilled accomplishment? Both?
a neat feet of
word weaving
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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This poem is spectacular and deserves multiple readings, because it is so jam-packed with concepts of maturity, faith, self-identity, creativity and on and on. You are such a precise writer that I hesitate to ask, but in the following lines, did you really mean "feet" as a reference to poetry, or "feat" as a skilled accomplishment? Both?
a neat feet of
word weaving
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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I am deeply honored by review, astounded at your ability to catch that error and read into it a multi-level pun / mirror 4/0 outstanding face you made my day you made my night I noticed your review board to confirm that you are they say that yes you're right that is a typographical error which will be created right now! Such an honor and a privilege and a pleasure to write with you here in this creative space.
space.
Blessings,
Brother Badger Cull
Darren
From the magical
Dead
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You are most welcome. I was really moved by the introspection of the poem. Yet it was in no way egotistical. I hope others "get" at least some of it. I also caught some multiple meanings in the shape of your poem near the end. I saw both a human and a phallus, but not in a raunchy way.
Comment from strandregs
I don't think you missed any words in the English language.
Or any philosophical ideas.
Or any badgers.
Jokes aside
You flow ideally and ideologically.
Without blemish.
A few contortions.
But an hour later.
Conclusion
I don't like long poems.
Unlike my daughters who declares forcefully.
I don't like poems at all.
So i say
Ok
Let me read you this review instead. :-))Z.
No not this one.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2021
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I don't think you missed any words in the English language.
Or any philosophical ideas.
Or any badgers.
Jokes aside
You flow ideally and ideologically.
Without blemish.
A few contortions.
But an hour later.
Conclusion
I don't like long poems.
Unlike my daughters who declares forcefully.
I don't like poems at all.
So i say
Ok
Let me read you this review instead. :-))Z.
No not this one.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2021
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Wow interesting review thank you so much oh, sorry for the delay
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Masterful wordplay and alliteration. I lost ccccccount amidst the word weaving. Wry bit re our euphemistic middle-age. Most of us expect to live to 130 at least. Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Masterful wordplay and alliteration. I lost ccccccount amidst the word weaving. Wry bit re our euphemistic middle-age. Most of us expect to live to 130 at least. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Hey, thanks Liz, I really appreciate your comments
An honor to write with you here, HAND
Have
A
Nice
Day
Blessings,
Brother Badger Cull
Darren
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
A Bit Passed; Half
by Badger_29
Hello,
I don't know if you remember me. We met in Sacramento at a park near my house. I don't live in Sacramento anymore. I moved to Pasadena.
I like your poem and also Basho's haiku in your author notes. It's beautiful.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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A Bit Passed; Half
by Badger_29
Hello,
I don't know if you remember me. We met in Sacramento at a park near my house. I don't live in Sacramento anymore. I moved to Pasadena.
I like your poem and also Basho's haiku in your author notes. It's beautiful.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Of course I remember you we went to top us for dinner can we had a cocktail and I was a gentleman and I miss you and I will always love you here's wishing you nothing but the best in Pasadena truly yours Darren
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
You wish to write more creditably, use your muse the best feasibly, and to connect the muse of your readers, in all dimensions of living, sharing your experience of a meaningful living, in appreciation, tune and note of God's grace, you wish to live another three scores to offer the music of living experience to your beloved and following readers and man at large across the world; well said, well done, thanks for sharing this exceptional work of lyrical verse, I do not have any 6-star; as a God-sent sponsor you may gift my premier shield upgrade membership.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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You wish to write more creditably, use your muse the best feasibly, and to connect the muse of your readers, in all dimensions of living, sharing your experience of a meaningful living, in appreciation, tune and note of God's grace, you wish to live another three scores to offer the music of living experience to your beloved and following readers and man at large across the world; well said, well done, thanks for sharing this exceptional work of lyrical verse, I do not have any 6-star; as a God-sent sponsor you may gift my premier shield upgrade membership.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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So good to hear from you and you from your shield is done.
Blessings,
Brother Badger Cull
Darren
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Thank you.
Your gift in $ not loaded to my account for my shield upgrade membership, please send $ MD and sponsor my membership.
With best wishes.
ALD
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Done now
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I just placed a gift of $10 into your account and that will purchase one month hopefully that helps I look forward to seeing you writing soon. If you'd like, we can work on one together since this is an official collaboration
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And if you'd like I'll even start it it'll go like this, I met a man a fascinating poet now we understand the tacit points of know it a rich deep vein of fellowship runs through this creative space and if I want to give you some advice, fellow, lay down your chips because it's the Apocalypse. How's that from shooting right from the hip?
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And this is what I would like in return I would like you to go into my portfolio and find over the Midway a bit past half part 2 and see how it ties in with the first part where do you look for me if you please sir. If you'd like I'll copy and paste into your message board and then you can find it in my portfolio blessing sir as God is watching and listening we are fellowshipping together in his name amen
Comment from Cindy Decker
I like your poem very much: the use of alliteration, and suffix rhymes. I love your direct connection with your readers, that's rare and effective! I just have one critique, in that it seems a little long in length. But I am used to shorter poetry. So it just may be my taste. Good work! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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I like your poem very much: the use of alliteration, and suffix rhymes. I love your direct connection with your readers, that's rare and effective! I just have one critique, in that it seems a little long in length. But I am used to shorter poetry. So it just may be my taste. Good work! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 18-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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thank you so much for your warm comments Cindy I appreciate you pointing out what you like and what you didn't like about my poetry. Blessings to you during these difficult times.
Brother Badger Cull
Darren
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I liked everything about your poem. A lot of people like long poems, some people like shorter ones. It?s just a matter of taste. Good work. Good luck.
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This is definitely a philosophical, poetic mouthful! It would be neat to hear this read aloud by the writer. My favorite lines might be: Downright wretched at times
as I etch my rhymes
which does, of course, describe the writing process more often than we want to admit. Interesting form. Sounds like 'dangling dainties' attract this writer, the same as the reader. Nice share.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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This is definitely a philosophical, poetic mouthful! It would be neat to hear this read aloud by the writer. My favorite lines might be: Downright wretched at times
as I etch my rhymes
which does, of course, describe the writing process more often than we want to admit. Interesting form. Sounds like 'dangling dainties' attract this writer, the same as the reader. Nice share.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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I thank you for your warm comments and wonderful review I really appreciate your critique.
Blessings to you during these difficult times.
Brother Badger Cull
Darren
