FAMILY TIES.
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Jack Is Back.""ALL IN THE FAMILY."
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Comment from Possummagic
I loved your crazy poem. Was it intended for children or adults because I saw it as a bit of fun poetry for all ages. I found myself with my favourite artist creating the scenes in my head. Well done. PM
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I loved your crazy poem. Was it intended for children or adults because I saw it as a bit of fun poetry for all ages. I found myself with my favourite artist creating the scenes in my head. Well done. PM
Comment Written 25-Sep-2018
Comment from WildWithWords
Interesting approach with the choice of couplets rather than traditional verses possibly a wise one. It allows you to throw in the longer line formats without being concerned with the extreme change in lines within each 4 line verse.
Cute ending with your version of a "Heeeeerrrreeee's Johnny!" moment.
Bill (WildWithWords)
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Interesting approach with the choice of couplets rather than traditional verses possibly a wise one. It allows you to throw in the longer line formats without being concerned with the extreme change in lines within each 4 line verse.
Cute ending with your version of a "Heeeeerrrreeee's Johnny!" moment.
Bill (WildWithWords)
Comment Written 25-Sep-2018
Comment from meeshu
very spooky, the form and versification adds a great deal to the creepiness. the tension builds throughout. my favorite: "everybody was sleeping but Jack, not him." nice and scary, Rhonnie.............meeshu
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very spooky, the form and versification adds a great deal to the creepiness. the tension builds throughout. my favorite: "everybody was sleeping but Jack, not him." nice and scary, Rhonnie.............meeshu
Comment Written 25-Sep-2018