Ode To Autumn
Ode To Autumn Contest Submission30 total reviews
Comment from Kelly Hanna
A very nice poem about the beauty of Autumn and the warning of winter. I enjoyed Autumn for a moment, regretted Jack Frost and then was back to rejoicing in the beauty of Autumn. Great photo as well.
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A very nice poem about the beauty of Autumn and the warning of winter. I enjoyed Autumn for a moment, regretted Jack Frost and then was back to rejoicing in the beauty of Autumn. Great photo as well.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2018
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good.
-The imagery is vivid, and the
personification of autumn with
a crown is effective.
-I like your concluding line, as well.
-Good luck in the contest.
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-Very nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good.
-The imagery is vivid, and the
personification of autumn with
a crown is effective.
-I like your concluding line, as well.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2018
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem and entry for the Autumn contest
with solid personification and imagery of Autumn.
Jack Frost can wait awhile before rejoicing
it's still eighty degrees here.
Excellent art work to match
Well done
Best wishes in the contest
RS
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This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem and entry for the Autumn contest
with solid personification and imagery of Autumn.
Jack Frost can wait awhile before rejoicing
it's still eighty degrees here.
Excellent art work to match
Well done
Best wishes in the contest
RS
Comment Written 24-Sep-2018
Comment from Hugh McDowell
Excellent. I love the personification of Fall. Nice use of the five seven five format. The poem flows and connects throughout. Hard to do with such a short length. On another level, one wonders if Jack Frost and Autumn have some type of relationship. Very good. Hugh
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Excellent. I love the personification of Fall. Nice use of the five seven five format. The poem flows and connects throughout. Hard to do with such a short length. On another level, one wonders if Jack Frost and Autumn have some type of relationship. Very good. Hugh
Comment Written 24-Sep-2018
Comment from Sally Law
I certainly hope you win the contest. This is wonderfully done. The picture reminiscent of Autumn in all her glory. She is a beauty! Thank you for this, I am certainly ready for the fall splendor to begin.
Kindest regards,
Sally
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I certainly hope you win the contest. This is wonderfully done. The picture reminiscent of Autumn in all her glory. She is a beauty! Thank you for this, I am certainly ready for the fall splendor to begin.
Kindest regards,
Sally
Comment Written 24-Sep-2018
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Well Jack Frost will soon take centre stage as he features next! Your words made me smile, a delightful 'Ode to Autumn', I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
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Well Jack Frost will soon take centre stage as he features next! Your words made me smile, a delightful 'Ode to Autumn', I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Sep-2018
Comment from June Sargent
Great entry! Summed up the beauty of Autumn in three short lines. She does deserve a crown for all the colors that Jack Frost has splashed upon her. Should do well in the contest .
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Great entry! Summed up the beauty of Autumn in three short lines. She does deserve a crown for all the colors that Jack Frost has splashed upon her. Should do well in the contest .
Comment Written 24-Sep-2018
Comment from Pantygynt
When one considers that the original ode form was a lengthy diatribe in praise of something it is amazing that the form has been cut down to 5-7-5 size. This is phrased like a haiku in that it has an excellent satori line that offers another vway of looking at it. Mr. Frost will not have long to wait. In fact I heard on the radio that temoperatures last night in parts of the UK fell to below freezing.
So Jack is back in employment once more.
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When one considers that the original ode form was a lengthy diatribe in praise of something it is amazing that the form has been cut down to 5-7-5 size. This is phrased like a haiku in that it has an excellent satori line that offers another vway of looking at it. Mr. Frost will not have long to wait. In fact I heard on the radio that temoperatures last night in parts of the UK fell to below freezing.
So Jack is back in employment once more.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2018
Comment from TPAC
Nice point of view about upcoming fall. The crown of leaves composing the glory of change with winter nipping close behind. I found this an appealing read.
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Nice point of view about upcoming fall. The crown of leaves composing the glory of change with winter nipping close behind. I found this an appealing read.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2018
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 ode to Autumn. The lady of Autumn wears the golden crown of the season before the ice queen will take over from her to bring the snow of winter.
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A very well-written 5-7-5 ode to Autumn. The lady of Autumn wears the golden crown of the season before the ice queen will take over from her to bring the snow of winter.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2018
