runaway bride
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Comment from dragonpoet
Well he was there to say I do but didn't if she ran away. It is very sad when this happens. I wonder if men do it too? It is always shown as a run away bride.
I like the internal rhyme
Congrats on the third place finish.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018
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Well he was there to say I do but didn't if she ran away. It is very sad when this happens. I wonder if men do it too? It is always shown as a run away bride.
I like the internal rhyme
Congrats on the third place finish.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 17-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018
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Thanks for the review. I am sure a few men have run also on the day. Haha. Marriage might just be over rated. Cheers, j
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You're welcome. They were just not adult enough. To me marriage is definitely not over rated, for I have been married for 32 years.
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cheers, j
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Have a good day.
Joan
Comment from Joan E.
I admired your clever wordplay in this tiny poem plus the intriguing artwork selection and title. (Your bio in your profile is as fascinating.) I am pleased your entry was well received in the contest. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2018
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I admired your clever wordplay in this tiny poem plus the intriguing artwork selection and title. (Your bio in your profile is as fascinating.) I am pleased your entry was well received in the contest. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 14-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2018
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Thanks for the review. Cheers, j
Comment from country ranch writer
running away bride she was all excited for this wonderful day but suddenly she has gotten cold feet.it happens to the best of us it is spontaneous to react.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2018
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running away bride she was all excited for this wonderful day but suddenly she has gotten cold feet.it happens to the best of us it is spontaneous to react.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2018
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Thanks for the insightful review and sparkly stars.Sometimes it is easier to run than to face our obligations, Have a wonderful Sunday, cheers, j
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Hummm
Comment from RodG
Quite a bit of narrative (beginning with the title) in only eight syllables. On one hand, it's amusing, largely because of the well-chosen rhymes; on the other hand, it's extremely sad if the reader merely asks "Why is she running away?"
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2018
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Quite a bit of narrative (beginning with the title) in only eight syllables. On one hand, it's amusing, largely because of the well-chosen rhymes; on the other hand, it's extremely sad if the reader merely asks "Why is she running away?"
Comment Written 23-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2018
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Cold feet? Thanks for the insightful review, it was a fun write, cheers, j
Comment from c_lucas
You got your point across using two different languages. This is very well with a smooth flow of words, making, making for a very interesting read. There is very good imagery.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2018
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You got your point across using two different languages. This is very well with a smooth flow of words, making, making for a very interesting read. There is very good imagery.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2018
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Thanks for the encouraging review. It was a fun write, cheers, j