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20 Syllable Poem Entry12 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
These twenty syllable can be both about Earthly love and Divine love. Both are a home for a person's heart and soul. The picture is peaceful like such a love
would make you.
Congratulations on placing second in the contest.
Keep writing
Joan
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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These twenty syllable can be both about Earthly love and Divine love. Both are a home for a person's heart and soul. The picture is peaceful like such a love
would make you.
Congratulations on placing second in the contest.
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 24-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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Thank you! Yes, I did have in mind a divine and an earthly love - both equally precious and peaceful.
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My pleasure.
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Comment from Ms. Snyder
Beautiful poem for the 20 syllable poem contest. I love the imagery that you have used through the fan art as well to talk about symbolism for beams and guides it is very appropriate for the lighthouse to be a part of the picture. Nice pick and superb poem! Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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Beautiful poem for the 20 syllable poem contest. I love the imagery that you have used through the fan art as well to talk about symbolism for beams and guides it is very appropriate for the lighthouse to be a part of the picture. Nice pick and superb poem! Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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Thank you for dropping by to read and share your sentiments.
Comment from MissMerri
This is just beautiful and sweet and goes so well with the illustration too.
I truly loved this, and I'm glad it was recognized by the committee. There were quite a few entries in this contest so you had to shine brightly to be noticed, and you did!
Great work. MM
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2019
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This is just beautiful and sweet and goes so well with the illustration too.
I truly loved this, and I'm glad it was recognized by the committee. There were quite a few entries in this contest so you had to shine brightly to be noticed, and you did!
Great work. MM
Comment Written 22-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read my entry and to share your sentiments. And, I especially appreciate the generous rating!
Comment from ajay53
It was an incredible experience to see those so thoughtfully chosen few words paired with that beautiful image that directly conveyed the sentiment expressed so well in the poem. Many thanks for sharing that and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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It was an incredible experience to see those so thoughtfully chosen few words paired with that beautiful image that directly conveyed the sentiment expressed so well in the poem. Many thanks for sharing that and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work. And I especially appreciate the generous stars!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, now that almost brings a tear, June -- just a beautiful sentiment and lovely statement! ;) ;) I do hope you have it framed and put by your front door to remind everyone of its meaning in your hearts!! ;);) thank you for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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Oh, now that almost brings a tear, June -- just a beautiful sentiment and lovely statement! ;) ;) I do hope you have it framed and put by your front door to remind everyone of its meaning in your hearts!! ;);) thank you for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 10-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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Thank you for taking the time to read and share your lovely sentiments.
Comment from 24chas
This was a really nice read, June Sargent. You really utilized the artwork nicely to complement your words of faith. Great writing and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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This was a really nice read, June Sargent. You really utilized the artwork nicely to complement your words of faith. Great writing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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Thank you for dropping by to read and share your insights.
Comment from Pamusart
Hi June. I am also on fanartreview and I love melyuki's work. She is Aussie. This looks like a good entry for the contest. A love poem! I enjoyed it. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
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Hi June. I am also on fanartreview and I love melyuki's work. She is Aussie. This looks like a good entry for the contest. A love poem! I enjoyed it. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 25-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
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Many thanks for your positive feedback - it's always nice when our work is appreciated!
Comment from Joan E.
I enjoyed your twenty-syllable, love poem and the accompany artwork that paralleled your theme. Best wishes in the competition and enjoy the fall- Joan
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2018
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I enjoyed your twenty-syllable, love poem and the accompany artwork that paralleled your theme. Best wishes in the competition and enjoy the fall- Joan
Comment Written 23-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2018
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Thank you for dropping by to review my short poem on the lighthouse!
Comment from patcelaw
This is a great write for the contest and the truth of your words is outstanding. Good luck in the contest. Blessings, Patricia
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2018
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This is a great write for the contest and the truth of your words is outstanding. Good luck in the contest. Blessings, Patricia
Comment Written 23-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2018
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Thank you for dropping by to review my short poem on the lighthouse!
Comment from melyuki
Hi June thank you for sharing your beautiful poem with meaning deep beyond its words. There is much depth in these lines and your title says it all. I'm humbled that you chose my artwork to accompany your verse. Best wishes and happy smiles to you
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2018
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Hi June thank you for sharing your beautiful poem with meaning deep beyond its words. There is much depth in these lines and your title says it all. I'm humbled that you chose my artwork to accompany your verse. Best wishes and happy smiles to you
Comment Written 23-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2018
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We have many lighthouses here on the New England shoreline dating back centuries - to guide those brave seafaring men back home to their anxious wives. And metaphorically speaking, love can be the light that guides us through life. Thank you for allowing us to use your artwork to enhance our words!