Comment from judiverse

Excellent

Have you been hallucinating? That picture looks absolutely goofy. Maybe it's part of the "me too" movement. Great use of alliteration. As this is a contest entry, you are right-on with the syllable count and this will be an unusual and humorous entry. Brett Kavanagh must be shuttering at the thought of all that pink power coming after him. judi

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2018

Thanks, Judi.

reply by judiverse on 26-Sep-2018

You're very welcome. judi

Comment from frogbook

Excellent

A bit of a frightening picture here my friend-may have a nightmare tonight. You do come up with some greats to accomidate your sense of humor and adventurous poem writing.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018

Thanks, FB

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hi Bill, this is certainly pink panic attack. I'm already running a mile. Great little 5-7-5 poem and wish you all the best with the contest judges. All the best. Ulla:))

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2018

Thanks, Ulla

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Not sure which is crazier: your chosen pic or that second line...hilarious!! :) :) A solid 5-7-5 with humor and alliteration -- great job! :) :) Thanx for sharing! :) Yvette

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2018

That is an odd picture.

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Never underestimate the power of pink. It has much more power than you might think. The pursuit of pink has driven many men over the brink. In the face of pink, some strong men have been known to shrink. Chasing that pink has caused some ships to sink. All hail the power of pink!

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2018

That review makes me blink (incessantly). I hear the clink of ice (oh no, I?m drinking again). I take a drink (oh good, it?s just poison). I think of pink (and take another drink). Humor.

reply by nomi338 on 23-Sep-2018

Ain't rhyming fun. Those who don't think better avoid the pink. Wink, wink

Comment from Earl Corp

Excellent

Pretty funny. You took three lines and made sense. nice job! Good luck in the contest. Cool picture accompanying the poem. Now get back to work on Bakers Dozen.

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2018

Thanks, Earl

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

The artwork is hilarious and your poem a gem! The poodle pack are in town, a fun write and your words made me smile Bill, best wishes, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2018

Thanks, Dolly

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Love the poem and the image, but the syllable count is wrong for a 5-7-5.

Middle line: "sculped fur and muscles jacked"

First word should be either: sculpted or scalped
Fourth line: Muscles is 2 syllables.
So middle line has 6 syllables if you use "scalped." And 7 syllables if you use sculpted. Your best choice is: "Scalped fur, muscles jacked."
Marilyn

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2018

Put the T in; all is well. Thanks, Marilyn.

Comment from Ogden

Excellent

Wow! That crew will strike fear in the mind of any dog!
One suggestion, Bill. I think "Panic" doesn't work, and a second "Poodle" would make it funnier.
Cheers,
Don

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2018

Thanks, Don. I'll consider it.

reply by Ogden on 22-Sep-2018

You're very welcome, Bill.
Don

Comment from Boogienights

Excellent

Fantastic! Who are these poodles? They look awesome! I wouldn't mind having some of their muscles and their courage. I love your poodle series, in fact I love all of your series. Thanks for making everyone smile. Bears next? :)

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2018

Bears it will be.