Smiles
Senryu8 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Senryu. There is always something that will bring a smile to our day. Life cannot be too sour to crack a smile when we desperately need a smile to cheer us up.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2018
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A very well-written Senryu. There is always something that will bring a smile to our day. Life cannot be too sour to crack a smile when we desperately need a smile to cheer us up.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2018
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Thank you.
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
Humor is great medicine! I love your message and it's a great one for this challenge on writing a senryu about human emotion. Love your topic! This is a solid poem for the contest, and I wish you lots of luck.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2018
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Humor is great medicine! I love your message and it's a great one for this challenge on writing a senryu about human emotion. Love your topic! This is a solid poem for the contest, and I wish you lots of luck.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2018
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Thank you.
Comment from Aries Poet
I like your poem, the saying is very true, always look for the humor, that will always put a smile on your face. Love the picture you chose for this poem
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2018
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I like your poem, the saying is very true, always look for the humor, that will always put a smile on your face. Love the picture you chose for this poem
Comment Written 22-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2018
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Thank you. Thank you.
Comment from meeshu
sound advice, anyone old enough to remember "Laughter is the Best Medicine" in Reader's D. not me. good luck in this contest..
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2018
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sound advice, anyone old enough to remember "Laughter is the Best Medicine" in Reader's D. not me. good luck in this contest..
Comment Written 22-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2018
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Thank you.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Good use of the senryu and great advice to live by -and all wonderfully rolled together for the contest! :) Thank you for sharing tonight and good luck! :)
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2018
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Good use of the senryu and great advice to live by -and all wonderfully rolled together for the contest! :) Thank you for sharing tonight and good luck! :)
Comment Written 21-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2018
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Thank you so much.
Comment from ciliverde
Uh oh, I'm not sure I want to try that! Eating till the wrinkles fill in, that is. Your poem is well-put, if you can find some reason to laugh, it will help lift your mood. Nicely done!
Carol
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2018
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Uh oh, I'm not sure I want to try that! Eating till the wrinkles fill in, that is. Your poem is well-put, if you can find some reason to laugh, it will help lift your mood. Nicely done!
Carol
Comment Written 21-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2018
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Thank you.
Comment from Hugh McDowell
Excellent sentiment. Always look for humor. Life is too short, feed the funny wolf, not the dour one. Loved the opening joke. Now I want some cake! Lol. Hugh
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2018
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Excellent sentiment. Always look for humor. Life is too short, feed the funny wolf, not the dour one. Loved the opening joke. Now I want some cake! Lol. Hugh
Comment Written 21-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2018
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Haha. Glad you enjoyed the humor. Thanks so much!
Comment from kathleenspalding
Haha - too true! (Your senryu, not the cartoon, LOL) Very clever and humorous Senryu gives good advice along with a laugh, using very few words. Great job! Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2018
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Haha - too true! (Your senryu, not the cartoon, LOL) Very clever and humorous Senryu gives good advice along with a laugh, using very few words. Great job! Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2018
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Thank you. All the best!
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You're welcome