She Gives God Praise
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Comment from BeasPeas
Very nice, Teri. Sometimes in church when the hymns are sung, I also get tears in my eyes. Faith can be a moving and rewarding experience. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2018
Very nice, Teri. Sometimes in church when the hymns are sung, I also get tears in my eyes. Faith can be a moving and rewarding experience. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 24-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2018
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Thank you so much Marilyn for the great review and very nice comments. There its nothing better than feeling the Holy Spirit in our presence! love, Teri
Comment from Dean Kuch
My pastor told me that we are never more humble than when we are down on our knees in prayer. For me, prayer and meditation in His word is a daily thing, just an important part of my daily routine.
I have no set times, I simply go with the flow.
I enjoyed your spiritually themed senryu poem.
Good luck to you in the contest and God bless,
~Dean
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2018
My pastor told me that we are never more humble than when we are down on our knees in prayer. For me, prayer and meditation in His word is a daily thing, just an important part of my daily routine.
I have no set times, I simply go with the flow.
I enjoyed your spiritually themed senryu poem.
Good luck to you in the contest and God bless,
~Dean
Comment Written 23-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2018
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Thank you so much Dean for the lovely and true review. I do the same each day. God is good all the time! Blessings, Teri
Comment from Kelly Grim
This is such a simple poem, and yet still so strong and so deep! There's something wonderful in the starkness of it. The raising of the hands, the tears, and then your last line -- "praising God on high" -- just beautiful! This art work is the perfect accompaniment for your piece. Very nicely done! I got such an uplifting feeling reading this! Good luck!
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2018
This is such a simple poem, and yet still so strong and so deep! There's something wonderful in the starkness of it. The raising of the hands, the tears, and then your last line -- "praising God on high" -- just beautiful! This art work is the perfect accompaniment for your piece. Very nicely done! I got such an uplifting feeling reading this! Good luck!
Comment Written 22-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2018
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Thank you so much for the lovely review and very nice comments. When someone is blessed with something I write it makes me smile! Blessings, Teri
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
What a wonderful human emotion to choose as your topic of choice for your senryu. Uplifting and inspiring--should fill readers with hope and faith. Great contest entry. Good luck.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2018
What a wonderful human emotion to choose as your topic of choice for your senryu. Uplifting and inspiring--should fill readers with hope and faith. Great contest entry. Good luck.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2018
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Thank you so much my friend for the great review and very nice comments! Blessings, Teri
Comment from royowen
An excellent entry in this senryu poetry contest, yes I couldn't agree more, God is worthy to be praised, and really nobody on earth, under it, or over deserves more than the Lord. Well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2018
An excellent entry in this senryu poetry contest, yes I couldn't agree more, God is worthy to be praised, and really nobody on earth, under it, or over deserves more than the Lord. Well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 21-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2018
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Thank you so much my friend for the great review and very nice comments! Blessings, Teri
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Most welcome Teri
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Senryu about the love of God we receive in abundance, and we can only praise him for as long as we live and trust Him for His mercy and wonderful love for us.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2018
A very well-written Senryu about the love of God we receive in abundance, and we can only praise him for as long as we live and trust Him for His mercy and wonderful love for us.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2018
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Thank you so much Sandra for the great review and very true comments! Blessings, Teri
Comment from victor 66
I'm not a believer, but I do appreciate your faith and dedication. I see no harm in it as long as it doesn't hurt others. You have good word choice and have followed the prompt guidelines. I wish you luck.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2018
I'm not a believer, but I do appreciate your faith and dedication. I see no harm in it as long as it doesn't hurt others. You have good word choice and have followed the prompt guidelines. I wish you luck.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2018
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Thank you for the very nice review and comments. I am just thankful that God saw something in me that I did not see one day. So many do not believe, but one day they will. Blessings, Teri
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Thank you, Teri.
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you are so welcome! Have a blessed night! Teri
Comment from nacwriter
You did an excellent job of writing a senryu and captured human emotion well. The illustration was great! I wouldn't change anything, except I might use a big smile instead of tears. (But that's me.) You brought it all together very well.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2018
You did an excellent job of writing a senryu and captured human emotion well. The illustration was great! I wouldn't change anything, except I might use a big smile instead of tears. (But that's me.) You brought it all together very well.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2018
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Thank you very much. I just know when the Holy Spirit touches me sometimes I have tears or joy and that is where the tears come in. Blessings, Teri
Comment from poetwatch
Praise the Lord, for He is everywhere. I like your senryu. it has the feeling as well as the message that everyone should hear. You have the correct syllable count. This is a good entry for the Senryu Poetry contest. Thank you for sharing. Good luck on the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2018
Praise the Lord, for He is everywhere. I like your senryu. it has the feeling as well as the message that everyone should hear. You have the correct syllable count. This is a good entry for the Senryu Poetry contest. Thank you for sharing. Good luck on the contest.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2018
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Thank you very much! Blessings!
Comment from Earl Corp
Cool graphic that you picked to accompany the poem. The message within the words is a positive one While not all poetry is eaqual this poem is above the pack. Nice job. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2018
Cool graphic that you picked to accompany the poem. The message within the words is a positive one While not all poetry is eaqual this poem is above the pack. Nice job. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 21-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2018
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Thank you so much for the great review and very nice comments! Blessings, Teri