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Animal poetry and short stories

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Comment from Teri7
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This is a very well written poem about this type of moth. I have never heard of it before now. It is kind of strange looking and kinds of looks like it could be an angel poodle moth. lol. Good job! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2018


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2018
    Thanks, Teri
reply by Teri7 on 21-Sep-2018
    you are so welcome. it was interesting!
Comment from Earl Corp
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Ok, nice foray into poetry, it made me laugh and had a cool graphic. But you need to get back to work on Baker's Dozen. I'm waiting on the next installment.

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2018


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2018
    On it.
Comment from nomi338
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What the bloody hell is that thing? It looks a damn sight. If I ever see one in person, I'm going in the other direction with a quickness. Looks positively demonic, scares the hell right out of me and I become angelic. Quite a feat, let me tell you. LOL

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2018


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2018
    He's a looker.
reply by nomi338 on 21-Sep-2018
    No Sh&#t!
Comment from BeasPeas
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This is cleverly composed, Bill. Image is adorable. I like the use of the word "lothst." Didn't know about this unique moth, but glad I do now. A fun piece. Marilyn

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2018


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2018
    Thanks, Marilyn
Comment from Pamusart
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Hi Bill. Maybe that moth can save Venezuela's economy. Lol. This must be a super closeup photo or else it is a very large moth. When we moved from California to Indiana, we knew nothing about black moth wasps. They are very large. They are wasps disguised as moths but buzzing like wasps. More than an inch long. It got lothst in my bedroom. No fun. I am allergic to insect venom. You did a great job. Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2018


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2018
    Thanks, Pam
Comment from damommy
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Strange looking but beautiful. Loved the rhymes moth and lothst. I wonder if his eyes really glow in the dark, and does he answer to 'Dwight'? Good addition to the poodle world.

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2018


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2018
    Thanks, da, for the nice review. I saw a picture of it at night; its eyes glow making it look like a fairy.
Comment from judiverse
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Oh, my. I can't believe that creature. It really looks like a poodle. It does look rather angelic, in a weird way. (The wings) I don't know whether Dwight is an appropriate name for this strange moth. Fun use of rhyme in this. judi

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2018


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2018
    Thanks, Judi. Dwight says Hi.
reply by judiverse on 20-Sep-2018
    Proud of his name, is he? judi
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Okay, so that is the strangest thing I've ever seen....and knowing Mr. Schott's tendency to write humor into his animal poems, I went online and looked the thing up - aaack! It's real!! :) :) :) Great poem, although I'm not sure about Dwight...perhaps Elvira? lol :) ;) Thanx for sharing the rhythmic animal lesson for the day! :)

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2018


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2018
    Thanks, Yvette. Apparently Dwight was only discovered a few years ago.
Comment from frogbook
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OMG, I loved this weird pic and the last line cracked me up while the rest gave me a great description of a very interesting member of nature!

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2018


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2018
    I probably wimped out on the final line.
Comment from Gloria ....
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This is great fun, even though that moth is looking mighty skeery, Bill.

Excellent rhyme and metre and I always enjoy your unique sense of humour.

Gloria

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2018


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2018
    Thanks, Gloria