Stolen- Book Chapter 2
It's the next part of my novelette.3 total reviews
Comment from Mabaker
This was very nicely put together and handled topics like poverty and theft and Christmas neatly. The characters were well thought out and the dialogue quite good. It was a story to point out things like theft are not good enough.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2018
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This was very nicely put together and handled topics like poverty and theft and Christmas neatly. The characters were well thought out and the dialogue quite good. It was a story to point out things like theft are not good enough.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2018
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Hi, Mabaker, for your kind comments and your feedback. I appreciate that you took the time to read my next chapter and comment on it. Thank you again.
Comment from ciliverde
This is a great story, I liked the tone of it a lot - I think it might be a good one for adults too, not just children :)
So why would this bad boy Pete steal their angel? It's not because there are other kids at home. Maybe he's never had a real Christmas with his family? It will be interesting to see what the chief finds out from him,
Carol
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2018
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This is a great story, I liked the tone of it a lot - I think it might be a good one for adults too, not just children :)
So why would this bad boy Pete steal their angel? It's not because there are other kids at home. Maybe he's never had a real Christmas with his family? It will be interesting to see what the chief finds out from him,
Carol
Comment Written 20-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2018
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Thank you, ciliverde, for your comments and feedback. You will have to read further to learn what happens next:)
Comment from poetwatch
Very good continuance to your novelette. It's bad to have your history stolen presents can be replaced but sentimental treasures cannot. I hope they catch the thief. This is a good entry. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2018
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Very good continuance to your novelette. It's bad to have your history stolen presents can be replaced but sentimental treasures cannot. I hope they catch the thief. This is a good entry. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2018
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Thank you, poetwatch, for your comments and feedback. I appreciate them so much:)
