Touch
My thoughts on life.21 total reviews
Comment from Harper J
This is exeptional . A lot of knowledge and home truths here. You know the bible and have written a deep interpretation of how things were and how things have been .
So had to give you a special star for a very special poem ..... Keep writing !
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2018
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This is exeptional . A lot of knowledge and home truths here. You know the bible and have written a deep interpretation of how things were and how things have been .
So had to give you a special star for a very special poem ..... Keep writing !
Comment Written 12-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2018
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Thanks Jean.
I enjoyed creating this
Doctor Ricky1024
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Hi Ricky , I gave you a six star rating for "Touch "
But can't see that six stars is showing for your work.
Is is showing for you ? If not I will get intouch with admin
Comment from karenina
This is a nebulous trail to follow...as is the power of touch, I think. Be it physical, emotional or spiritual, the human spirit is not meant to exist in a vacuum. Each of us hungers for the validation of touch to give us meaning, to buttress our faith...
Karenina
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2018
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This is a nebulous trail to follow...as is the power of touch, I think. Be it physical, emotional or spiritual, the human spirit is not meant to exist in a vacuum. Each of us hungers for the validation of touch to give us meaning, to buttress our faith...
Karenina
Comment Written 21-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2018
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Sounds like my work was not wasted here.
Thanks Karenina and have a blessed day.
Doctor Ricky...
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
A beautiful description of touch and the sharing of all that God's love can offer. Very inspirational. The photo you choose was special. I wish you lots of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2018
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A beautiful description of touch and the sharing of all that God's love can offer. Very inspirational. The photo you choose was special. I wish you lots of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2018
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Thanks Cindy, this was important to me.
Ricky...
Comment from mermaids
I like your verses about the Triplets creating nature, the reptiles, fish and animals. This is an excellent faith based poem that tells the human story in poetic form. I also like how you show science and religion as the same. Excellent free verse form and you have a strong steady beat that makes this a poem to be read out loud.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2018
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I like your verses about the Triplets creating nature, the reptiles, fish and animals. This is an excellent faith based poem that tells the human story in poetic form. I also like how you show science and religion as the same. Excellent free verse form and you have a strong steady beat that makes this a poem to be read out loud.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2018
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Glad you dug it Elaine.
I knew you would like the part about the sea and it's creatures.
Ricky....
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, I am practically speechless - this is an incredible read in its detailed account of creation, genesis, and our world today - the pleasure, the pain, the purpose and the suggestion of the Apocalypse. What a read - I was transfixed. To me, it does not adhere to any particular form, because of its emotional and dramatic expression - a new form in what I would describe as epic...
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2018
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In my opinion, I am practically speechless - this is an incredible read in its detailed account of creation, genesis, and our world today - the pleasure, the pain, the purpose and the suggestion of the Apocalypse. What a read - I was transfixed. To me, it does not adhere to any particular form, because of its emotional and dramatic expression - a new form in what I would describe as epic...
Comment Written 21-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2018
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Thanks all my here was worth it.
Doctor Ricky 1024
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You are very welcome...Eve
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Ricky1024
Your title to your free verse poem is very good, why I relive what you are saying (in your long way)
of telling us about how we should touch on that it wasn't God Himself it was the three in one
God, Son and the Holy Spirit is the way that how Earth was created.
Gert
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2018
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Hello Ricky1024
Your title to your free verse poem is very good, why I relive what you are saying (in your long way)
of telling us about how we should touch on that it wasn't God Himself it was the three in one
God, Son and the Holy Spirit is the way that how Earth was created.
Gert
Comment Written 21-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2018
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Glad you enjoyed this Gert.
Doctor Ricky 1024
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You are welcome Ricky
Gert
Comment from Cheryl1957
I found this to be a very interesting, well written poem. I really liked the language you used to personify creation story, and thought referring to the trinity as the triplets was clever. It definitely held my attention and made me want to ready more. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2018
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I found this to be a very interesting, well written poem. I really liked the language you used to personify creation story, and thought referring to the trinity as the triplets was clever. It definitely held my attention and made me want to ready more. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 21-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2018
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Glad you enjoyed this.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from dragonpoet
This goes through all of the creation story in Genesis. I think there are some good points. But it is a too long for my liking. I can't tell if the poem ended at the date or it was meant to continue and you didn't change the location of the date.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2018
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This goes through all of the creation story in Genesis. I think there are some good points. But it is a too long for my liking. I can't tell if the poem ended at the date or it was meant to continue and you didn't change the location of the date.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 21-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2018
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Thanks Dragon.
Out of about twenty reviews all were fives and sixes.
Doctor Ricky 1024
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You're welcome.
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Comment from A. Willow Bends
Very interesting, to go from Biblical to New Jersey. Creative and unique. I like what you are doing. Very different approach to things, which is poetically wonderful, in my opinion. Good Luck and Keep doing what you are doing! :)
Wendy
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2018
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Very interesting, to go from Biblical to New Jersey. Creative and unique. I like what you are doing. Very different approach to things, which is poetically wonderful, in my opinion. Good Luck and Keep doing what you are doing! :)
Wendy
Comment Written 21-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2018
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Glad you enjoyed this Willow.
Ricky
Comment from RGstar
I must admit. I read through the whole, yet, as deep as it was, throuh the various stages, it was far too long to hold on to its understanding with the various stages it went through.
Having said that, I always like to read from you, for I know it will be guts, heart and depth.
Yu took a great deal of care and time with this, and I always like to see things written with care and attention.
Good luck with it.
My best wishes.
RGstar
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2018
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I must admit. I read through the whole, yet, as deep as it was, throuh the various stages, it was far too long to hold on to its understanding with the various stages it went through.
Having said that, I always like to read from you, for I know it will be guts, heart and depth.
Yu took a great deal of care and time with this, and I always like to see things written with care and attention.
Good luck with it.
My best wishes.
RGstar
Comment Written 21-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2018
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Glad you enjoyed this lengthy piece.
Based on four sources.
Doctor Ricky 1024
