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3 Line Poem ... 5-7-5 (3rd place)16 total reviews
Comment from Hugh McDowell
Excellent. This is a very finely constructed poem. A silent flower that sings through its color. Each line has a key word; silent, sings, megaphone. The writing flows seamlessly. Very good. Hugh
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2018
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Excellent. This is a very finely constructed poem. A silent flower that sings through its color. Each line has a key word; silent, sings, megaphone. The writing flows seamlessly. Very good. Hugh
Comment Written 22-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2018
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Thank you so much Hugh. Your insightful review on my 5-7-5 poem is very much appreciated. ~DD
Comment from Irish Rain
Oh wow. I predict the winner. This is the best I've read. It's a flawless entry, and I wish I had a six for you! Good luck, I don't think you'll need it!
Blessings...
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2018
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Oh wow. I predict the winner. This is the best I've read. It's a flawless entry, and I wish I had a six for you! Good luck, I don't think you'll need it!
Blessings...
Comment Written 21-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2018
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Irish Rain, thank you very much for your most encouraging review on my 5-7-5. The thought of a six is very complimentary. I appreciate your kind comments. ~DD
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a lovely three line poem about the charming daffodil. They are one of the first to bloom and spring and I always look forward to them. They ARE a megaphone for the new season. Beautifully composed and displayed. Marilyn
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2018
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This is a lovely three line poem about the charming daffodil. They are one of the first to bloom and spring and I always look forward to them. They ARE a megaphone for the new season. Beautifully composed and displayed. Marilyn
Comment Written 21-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2018
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Marilyn, thank you for your most encouraging review on my 5-7-5 poem. I appreciate your comments and support. ~DD
Comment from lyenochka
Lovely one! I like contrast of the "silent" daffodil which "sings loudly" with its color. And then you give us a visual imagery with the daffodils cupped petals that does look like a "megaphone."
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2018
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Lovely one! I like contrast of the "silent" daffodil which "sings loudly" with its color. And then you give us a visual imagery with the daffodils cupped petals that does look like a "megaphone."
Comment Written 20-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2018
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Lyenochka, thank you for your thorough review. I appreciate your observant comments. ~DD
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a nicely written and illustrate poem. I like the personification of the bright color and the megaphone metaphor. Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2018
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This is a nicely written and illustrate poem. I like the personification of the bright color and the megaphone metaphor. Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 20-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2018
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Dragonpoet, your thoughtful review of my 5-7-5 poem is very much appreciated. Thank you. ~DD
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You are most kindly welcome, DD.
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You are most kindly welcome, DD.
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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written three-line poem about the bright daffodils in the field that silently sing their song with trumpet like faces for everyone to see and adore in the gardener's flower garden.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2018
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A very well-written three-line poem about the bright daffodils in the field that silently sing their song with trumpet like faces for everyone to see and adore in the gardener's flower garden.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2018
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Sandra, as always, your review of my 5-7-5 poem is very much appreciated. Thank you. ~DD
Comment from Sugarray77
DD, you have a winner here. I enjoyed reading your take on the daffodil .. one of my all-time favorite flowers. Well constructed and a colorful presentation. Well done.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2018
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DD, you have a winner here. I enjoyed reading your take on the daffodil .. one of my all-time favorite flowers. Well constructed and a colorful presentation. Well done.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2018
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Sugarray77 - thank you for your most encouraging review on my 5-7-5 poem. I appreciate your comments and support. ~DD
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello and smiles PoemsOfDD
I like how you brought out why a daffodil should be proud ' of its bright yellow hue that shines like the sun and looking at the shape of its bloom does look like a megaphone
Gert
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2018
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Hello and smiles PoemsOfDD
I like how you brought out why a daffodil should be proud ' of its bright yellow hue that shines like the sun and looking at the shape of its bloom does look like a megaphone
Gert
Comment Written 20-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2018
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Thank you Gert for your thoughtful review of my 5-7-5 poem. Your comments are always appreciated. ~DD
Comment from Boogienights
It does look like a megaphone doesn't it? I never thought of that, it's very creative! Its color is loud too...they are beautiful flowers, one of my favorites. A nice entry for the 3 line contest..best of luck.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2018
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It does look like a megaphone doesn't it? I never thought of that, it's very creative! Its color is loud too...they are beautiful flowers, one of my favorites. A nice entry for the 3 line contest..best of luck.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2018
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Boogienights, thank you for your supportive review on my 5-7-5 poem. I appreciate your comments. ~DD
Comment from zanya
Superb three line poem - really states its case emphatically - alas we must wait for the passage of Autumn and Winter to experience its classic beauty once again
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2018
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Superb three line poem - really states its case emphatically - alas we must wait for the passage of Autumn and Winter to experience its classic beauty once again
Comment Written 20-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2018
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Thank you Kelly for your very supportive review on my 5-7-5 poem. I am happy you got all aspects of this short piece, I appreciate that. ~DD