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Comment from frogbook
Great poem about a great time and a fun sister. I'm glad you didn't leave this famous poodle attire out of your poodle studies.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2018
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Great poem about a great time and a fun sister. I'm glad you didn't leave this famous poodle attire out of your poodle studies.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2018
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Poodle skirts was a suggestion from a fan. Was it you?
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No, but I have worn one on Halloween a few times and found it great attire!
Comment from nomi338
Your search for answers only reveal one pertinent one. AS the song says, :Girls just want to have fun." Surprise guys, this is a little known fact. stop treating girls as a foreign species. Girls like guys, enjoy laughs, drinks, an occasional some or toke, and yes good sex. Surprise, surprise. Take the right approach to women and you will have one hell of a good time.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2018
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Your search for answers only reveal one pertinent one. AS the song says, :Girls just want to have fun." Surprise guys, this is a little known fact. stop treating girls as a foreign species. Girls like guys, enjoy laughs, drinks, an occasional some or toke, and yes good sex. Surprise, surprise. Take the right approach to women and you will have one hell of a good time.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2018
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Okay, nomi. Girls want to smoke herb and knock back Jell-O shots. Bless them.
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What could be wrong with that? As long as none of those girls are my daughter or grand daughter. LOL.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
And don't forget the ponytails! :) ;) So, a fun poem and one that uses a word I don't think I've heard since back in high school when I had to learn it! ;) :) The fact that you rhymed cigarettes and suffragettes..? Kudos, sir!! :) ;)
Thanx for sharing! :) Yvette
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018
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And don't forget the ponytails! :) ;) So, a fun poem and one that uses a word I don't think I've heard since back in high school when I had to learn it! ;) :) The fact that you rhymed cigarettes and suffragettes..? Kudos, sir!! :) ;)
Thanx for sharing! :) Yvette
Comment Written 19-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018
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Thanks, Yvette.
Comment from lyenochka
Lol! Somehow I think that poodle skirts sort of reduces or negates the power of the suffragettes. And the smoking of cigarettes hardly seems a worthwhile equality to fight for. Good presentation!
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018
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Lol! Somehow I think that poodle skirts sort of reduces or negates the power of the suffragettes. And the smoking of cigarettes hardly seems a worthwhile equality to fight for. Good presentation!
Comment Written 19-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018
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The term suffragette is used tongue-in-cheek
Comment from Henry King
What an excellent humorous poem Bill. This poem can be taken a couple of ways. Did she lead or follow? What is her life style now? Don't answer the questions, please, because they are not my business. My sisters are a little older than you. Both are retired school teachers with a passel of great-grandkids. One did as your sister did, and the other was straight and narrow. They both did rather well financially, with good kids and families. It must have been nurture and not nature.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018
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What an excellent humorous poem Bill. This poem can be taken a couple of ways. Did she lead or follow? What is her life style now? Don't answer the questions, please, because they are not my business. My sisters are a little older than you. Both are retired school teachers with a passel of great-grandkids. One did as your sister did, and the other was straight and narrow. They both did rather well financially, with good kids and families. It must have been nurture and not nature.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018
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Thanks, Henry. My oldest sister likely wore the skirt. The one in the middle did the drinking and smoking. I wore the halo.
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You are welcome. You have a lively set if sibs.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
He he he you made me smile Bill! Did those suffragettes really drink beers? Maybe they did as they were quite strong women! And I thank them to this day! Your poem is a lot of fun, from the skirt to the poodle on it, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018
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He he he you made me smile Bill! Did those suffragettes really drink beers? Maybe they did as they were quite strong women! And I thank them to this day! Your poem is a lot of fun, from the skirt to the poodle on it, love Dolly x
Comment Written 19-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018
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Thanks, Dolly.
Comment from damommy
I remember those skirts well, but I never wanted one. You must have read about them, because I know you're too young for that time. I think the more outgoing girls had these skirts. I was too shy for the attention it would get.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018
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I remember those skirts well, but I never wanted one. You must have read about them, because I know you're too young for that time. I think the more outgoing girls had these skirts. I was too shy for the attention it would get.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018
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I think they came and went like nehru jackets and elephant bells.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I love the skirt, Bill. I enjoyed your poem, it has a catchy rhythm and is very smooth. Did suffragettes drink beer?? I'll have to add that to my story, LOL. Well done.. :) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018
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I love the skirt, Bill. I enjoyed your poem, it has a catchy rhythm and is very smooth. Did suffragettes drink beer?? I'll have to add that to my story, LOL. Well done.. :) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 19-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018
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The term suffragettes is used tongue-in-cheek here to signify women wanting freedom. and rights.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Hah, poodle skirts were so fashionable before my time, Bill. Your picture is great. I like the rhymes. Your lines flow smoothly with good rhymes, too. Thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018
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Hah, poodle skirts were so fashionable before my time, Bill. Your picture is great. I like the rhymes. Your lines flow smoothly with good rhymes, too. Thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 19-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018
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Thanks, Jan.
Comment from Aries Poet
Great poem about women being feminine but strong, wild and free! I loved the way the poem read and the picture you chose to use. I remember wearing skirts that had hems way below the knee and I had friends just like the picture depicts and your poetry describes.
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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018
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Great poem about women being feminine but strong, wild and free! I loved the way the poem read and the picture you chose to use. I remember wearing skirts that had hems way below the knee and I had friends just like the picture depicts and your poetry describes.
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Comment Written 19-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018
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Thanks, Margarita.