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Comment from KyColonel Randal
Thank you for sharing. You poem is a very nice children's poem. The picture you have chosen to illustrate your poem compliments it well. I had always heard the phrase as "rain, rain, go away, come again some other day." It is funny how things are passed down differently.
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Thank you for sharing. You poem is a very nice children's poem. The picture you have chosen to illustrate your poem compliments it well. I had always heard the phrase as "rain, rain, go away, come again some other day." It is funny how things are passed down differently.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2018
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A fun children's poem that would do quite well as a fun little elementary book with some really cool illustrations -- great job! :) :) Just one grammatical catch: "Streak across" should be 'Streaks across' -- but, overall, good job! :) ;)
Thank you for sharing that smile with the children out here of all ages! :)
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A fun children's poem that would do quite well as a fun little elementary book with some really cool illustrations -- great job! :) :) Just one grammatical catch: "Streak across" should be 'Streaks across' -- but, overall, good job! :) ;)
Thank you for sharing that smile with the children out here of all ages! :)
Comment Written 18-Sep-2018