Comment from Nanny 6

Excellent

Well, at least you got to enjoy conversation with her mom, and sounds like it was a great lunch anyway. Delightful story in only 50 words. Good luck in the contest.
Judy

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2018

Many thanks for the great review

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

He he he, old people like mixing with young people as it makes them feel younger themselves and your short write have a great impact and your words are profound, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2018

Thank you Dolly, my friend. X

Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

Hi Jen. Did you mean to end the first sentence with staying? Staying with us? Staying for dinner? This is humorous as well. You have a talent for it. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing

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 Comment Written 18-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2018

It makes perfect sense to me, perhaps because I'm English. (Lost in traslation maybe?). Thanks for the review. Much appreciated. X

Comment from PoemsOfDD

Excellent

Ha ha - this is funny. Just goes to show one can never truly take control even when the best intentions are at heart. This is a good entry for the 50 word story and all the more enjoyable because it is non fiction. Best of luck in the competition. ~DD

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 Comment Written 18-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2018

Thank you so much for the great review.