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50 Word Contest Entry

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Comment from frogbook
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Ha. This tongue-in-cheek ribbing was well taken by this reader who doesn't always write of happy endings-haha. Great idea. Best of luck with your entry.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2018

reply by the author on 18-Sep-2018
    Lol, yeah, write something that doesn't have a pretty, happy outcome and you can bet it won't do good in 'these' booths, that's for sure. Thank you for the great review, FB. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from jenintorre
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You missed out slushy, yucky love poems. I love this and I so agree with you. I can't wait to see who has written this masterpeice.
Lots of luck in the flash fiction contest. Rock on. Jen.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2018

reply by the author on 18-Sep-2018
    Lol, yeah, I wanted to add love in there as well but the list was already fairly long with just the 3. Haha. Thank you for the great review, Jen. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked my silly little piece. Have a great day.
Comment from LyndaS
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Jeepers, poet, you do an excellent job of grabbing the reader and taking her on a magic carpet ride only to have the carburetor blow and consequently do a swan dive onto the pavement. This was funny as hell and the payoff was sweet. You write very well for a sarcastic soul. Good luck in this contest. I loved this!

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2018

reply by the author on 18-Sep-2018
    Thank you for the fantastic review, Lynda. Yeah, I usually blow a lot of carburetors on here, lol. I'm glad you liked this silliness. Thank you again. Have a wonderful day.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Well gardens, pets or alzheimer's is not a bad start, but I think you'll find that there is a much wider audience on here, go on share your unimaginable tales of heroism and adventures, we all love a brave story, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2018

reply by the author on 18-Sep-2018
    Thank you for the great review, Dolly. I really appreciate the gracious stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this silly thing.
Comment from giraffmang
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Hi there,

Man, you forgot the puppies... never forget the puppies. They win all the time... oh, and the cats too... or another mundane story about a woman doing absolutely nothing of interest...

In the vastness of a writer's imagination, boxes are the enemy of creativity...

I liked this piece. It has a very lyrical and poetic nature to it.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2018

reply by the author on 18-Sep-2018
    Haha, yes, how dumb of me...puppies, of course. I might have to trade one of my words off for 'pets.' Thank you for the great review, GMG. I really appreciate the generous stars. I didn't think I was even going to get one review, lol. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have a great night.