Comment from frogbook

Excellent

An evil little one you show here! Pretty sure I wouldn't want to see him in a dark alley. Wonder what kind of teeth are hidden under that scowl. A gross little poem to describe him-haha.

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2018

Thanks, FB

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Those self portraits are always tricky. The subject in question is rather pale, don't you think? Maybe he should get some more sun, and would it hurt to smile a little bit? You know a smile goes a long way toward covering life's little mishaps.

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2018

It does look like a dog drew this.

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

LOL! :) :) Another fun 5-7-5 to help start the week off with a smile! :) Hey, great idea! You could sell subscriptions to a weekly email list so that folks get their weekly or daily or whatever dose of a smile thanx to Bill and the fun animal of a day/week/whatever!! :) :)
Thanx for the smile and for sharing your knack with the poetry pen! :) Yvette

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2018

Thank you, Yvette. You make me blush.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Haha, it seems like you were going for alliteration with the letter 'p'. Your art choice is perfect. Perhaps, perchance, I missed the point. Perplexing. Thanks for sharing. Jan

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2018

I guess it was a review of the sketch artist.

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

The portrayal expression is nice to read, I enjoyed the contrast of the sketch is explored and projected in a word; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2018

Thanks, ALD