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FAMILY TIES.

Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "Wilma n Fred."
"ALL IN THE FAMILY."

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Comment from Bill Schott
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This short short story, Wilma n Fred, puts the Flintstones in the present and gives our boy the news of a lifetime. His reaction is classic and understandable, at least by me. Great play on his iconic bellow.

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2018

reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
    HELLO BILL: Thank you for the stars and for viewing my work. Cartoons have always been a perk for me. And that makes them so easy to relate to and jazz up a bit. I'm loving it. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment from Nanny 6
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This was hilarious! To bring back Fred and Wilma back from archived cartoons and make this hilarious short story was very creative, I thoroughly enjoyed the read .
Judy

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2018

reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
    HELLO Nanny 6: Thank you for using your valuable time to view my work. Thank you for the stars. I appreciate them. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment from Hugh McDowell
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Very funny. I'm old enough to remember watching the original cartoons. I always thought Wilma was kind of sexy. As a kid, I never thought of Fred and Wilma having sex! Yabba Dabba Do!!! Hugh

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2018

reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
    HELLO Hugh: Thank you for viewing my work. Thank you for the stars. People like you inspire me to write more: Cordially: rhonnie69.