From The Beginning...
Always meant to be12 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This essence poem, From the Beginning, has both the internal and end rhyme, and six-syllables-per-line requirements. The joy of tripping the light fantastic with a newfound love interest is heady stuff.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
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This essence poem, From the Beginning, has both the internal and end rhyme, and six-syllables-per-line requirements. The joy of tripping the light fantastic with a newfound love interest is heady stuff.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
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Thanx, Bill. :)
Comment from Kelly Grim
Really a beautiful piece! You are able to capture the excitement of a first time together and also suggest true love with "hints we'll dance forever" It's such a happy piece and the artwork makes it that much more so! Just beautiful. The internal rhyme is there with chance and dance, and the end rhyme with endeavor and forever. The title and the description are perfect and add to the meaning. I think this is a true contest contender!
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
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Really a beautiful piece! You are able to capture the excitement of a first time together and also suggest true love with "hints we'll dance forever" It's such a happy piece and the artwork makes it that much more so! Just beautiful. The internal rhyme is there with chance and dance, and the end rhyme with endeavor and forever. The title and the description are perfect and add to the meaning. I think this is a true contest contender!
Comment Written 15-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
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Thank you so much, Kelly!!! Love that you stopped by! :) ;) This short form was actually more challenging up front, but after I got into it, I had fun creating multiple ones....then I had to choose!! :) ;) I am so glad you enjoyed it - must mean I made the right choice! :) ;) Thanx for the read and review today and I wish for you a fantastical weekend of magical melodies and soft, relaxing whispers of inspiration! :) ;) Yvette [can sign my name now that the voting is over - lol!]
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You are welcome, Yvette! I really enjoyed the piece! And congrats on your first place finish!!! I love all the different prompts and forms... it's so fun trying to come up with the perfect poem for these contests!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a beautiful presentation, Mystery Author. Good job on the style of the essence poem. You have everything correct. I like your message. Best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
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This is a beautiful presentation, Mystery Author. Good job on the style of the essence poem. You have everything correct. I like your message. Best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 14-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
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Thank you so much, Jan!!! Love that you stopped by! :) ;) This short form was actually more challenging up front, but after I got into it, I had fun creating multiple ones....then I had to choose!! :) ;) I am so glad you enjoyed it - must mean I made the right choice! :) ;) Thanx for the read and review today and I wish for you a fantastical weekend of magical melodies and soft, relaxing whispers of inspiration! :) ;) Yvette [can sign my name now that the voting is over - lol!]
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written essence poem about the first time we meet someone and immediately know that we belong together for the rest of our lives and there is a special bond that cannot easily be broken.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2018
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A very well-written essence poem about the first time we meet someone and immediately know that we belong together for the rest of our lives and there is a special bond that cannot easily be broken.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2018
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Thank you for taking the time to review my work, Sandra -- always much appreciated on this end! :) ;) This short form was actually more challenging up front, but after I got into it, I had fun creating multiple ones....then I had to choose!! :) ;) I am so glad you enjoyed it - must mean I made the right choice! :) ;) Thanx again for stopping by today and I wish for you a fantastical weekend of magical melodies and soft, relaxing whispers of inspiration! :) ;)
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello!
Simply joyful.
Your Essence poem just makes me want to smile, and your chosen artwork surely heighten the positive message your poem renders. Internal and end rhymes are "spot on!" Well-executed!
Best Wishes!
diane
diane
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2018
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Hello!
Simply joyful.
Your Essence poem just makes me want to smile, and your chosen artwork surely heighten the positive message your poem renders. Internal and end rhymes are "spot on!" Well-executed!
Best Wishes!
diane
diane
Comment Written 14-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2018
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Thank you so much, Mrs. KT!!! Love that you stopped by! :) ;) This short form was actually more challenging up front, but after I got into it, I had fun creating multiple ones....then I had to choose!! :) ;) I am so glad you enjoyed it - must mean I made the right choice! :) ;) Thanx for the read and review today and I wish for you a fantastical weekend of magical melodies and soft, relaxing whispers of inspiration! :) ;)
Comment from Sally Law
This is WOW! The artwork is fab and so is the verse. This is beautifully done. Thank you for this. You should print a few and enter them in an art show! People love these kind of gifts for weddings, engagements and anniversaries. I hope to see more of you here on FanStory. Of course, I am new, so everyone is sorta new to me.
Kindest regards to you and yours,
Sally
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2018
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This is WOW! The artwork is fab and so is the verse. This is beautifully done. Thank you for this. You should print a few and enter them in an art show! People love these kind of gifts for weddings, engagements and anniversaries. I hope to see more of you here on FanStory. Of course, I am new, so everyone is sorta new to me.
Kindest regards to you and yours,
Sally
Comment Written 14-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2018
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Thank you so much, Sally, and welcome aboard!!! Love that you stopped by! :) ;) This short form was actually more challenging up front, but after I got into it, I had fun creating multiple ones....then I had to choose!! :) ;) I am so glad you enjoyed it - must mean I made the right choice! :) ;) Thanx for the read and review today and I wish for you a fantastical weekend of magical melodies and soft, relaxing whispers of inspiration! :) ;)
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You are very welcome!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks about essence, whatever we do, in any field whatsoever, there is beginning, first chance of dance continues; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2018
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This speaks about essence, whatever we do, in any field whatsoever, there is beginning, first chance of dance continues; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 14-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2018
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Thank you for taking the time to review my work, DR ALCREATOR -- always much appreciated on this end! :) ;) This short form was actually more challenging up front, but after I got into it, I had fun creating multiple ones....then I had to choose!! :) ;) I am so glad you enjoyed it - must mean I made the right choice! :) ;) Thanx again for stopping by today and I wish for you a fantastical weekend of magical melodies and soft, relaxing whispers of inspiration! :) ;)
Comment from Dawn Munro
Ooooooooooh! Well done indeed! This wee jewel is so romantic. Fabulous use of language to tell a story, with correct syllable count for the format, and wonderful rhyme -- I'm predicting a winner!
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2018
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Ooooooooooh! Well done indeed! This wee jewel is so romantic. Fabulous use of language to tell a story, with correct syllable count for the format, and wonderful rhyme -- I'm predicting a winner!
Comment Written 14-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2018
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Thank you so much, Dawn!!! Love that you stopped by! :) ;) This short form was actually more challenging up front, but after I got into it, I had fun creating multiple ones....then I had to choose!! :) ;) I am so glad you enjoyed it - must mean I made the right choice! :) ;) Thanx for the read and review today and I wish for you a fantastical weekend of magical melodies and soft, relaxing whispers of inspiration! :) ;)
Comment from June Sargent
Very well written essence poem that not only met all the requirements, but painted a lovely picture of a budding romance. And the artwork is stunning. I enjoyed it. Should do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2018
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Very well written essence poem that not only met all the requirements, but painted a lovely picture of a budding romance. And the artwork is stunning. I enjoyed it. Should do well in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2018
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Thank you for taking the time to review my work, June Sargent -- always much appreciated on this end! :) ;) This short form was actually more challenging up front, but after I got into it, I had fun creating multiple ones....then I had to choose!! :) ;) I am so glad you enjoyed it - must mean I made the right choice! :) ;) Thanx again for stopping by today and I wish for you a fantastical weekend of magical melodies and soft, relaxing whispers of inspiration! :) ;)
Comment from poesyapprentice
I think this may be the best Essence entry that I have read so far. Rules were followed. Very pretty visual presentation and imagery in the write. It all made me smile. Good luck to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2018
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I think this may be the best Essence entry that I have read so far. Rules were followed. Very pretty visual presentation and imagery in the write. It all made me smile. Good luck to you in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2018
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Thank you for taking the time to review my work, poesyapprentice -- always much appreciated on this end! :) ;) This short form was actually more challenging up front, but after I got into it, I had fun creating multiple ones....then I had to choose!! :) ;) I am so glad you enjoyed it - must mean I made the right choice! :) ;) Thanx again for stopping by today and I wish for you a fantastical weekend of magical melodies and soft, relaxing whispers of inspiration! :) ;)
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Loved your poetic reply : )
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Btw, I decided to vote for you : )
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Thank you so very much! You've put a smile on my face to last into tomorrow -- take care! :) ;)
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Not sure you needed my vote since you are in the lead, but you are welcome! Looks like I am going to have to step it up if I'm going to compete against you in the future lol ; )
