Call Father A Father!
A 13 Line Poem A great grandfather he-goat wants a name59 total reviews
Comment from Heather Knight
So the goats want to have names?
I have a question though. In your last line you say Daniel worries. Why? I must have missed something.
Thanks for sharing.
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So the goats want to have names?
I have a question though. In your last line you say Daniel worries. Why? I must have missed something.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2019
Comment from dragonpoet
This shows the classroom as sheep for the teacher. The teacher always worries. This uses the words well. Hope this did well in the long ago contest.
Keep writing
Joan
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This shows the classroom as sheep for the teacher. The teacher always worries. This uses the words well. Hope this did well in the long ago contest.
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 12-Jul-2019
Comment from jusylee72
I wish I could say I get the joke, but i don't. What is the joke? you did use all the words and make it interesting, but what is the punchline. Help me please I want to understand. Please reply, I will change my rating if I understand it.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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I wish I could say I get the joke, but i don't. What is the joke? you did use all the words and make it interesting, but what is the punchline. Help me please I want to understand. Please reply, I will change my rating if I understand it.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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Thank you for the review with a question.
The poem tells jokes.
He-goat asks a professor for a name ? a joke; asks for a relation name ? a joke, asks for a name for all their community ? a joke; professor assures a name ? a joke; a name after passing a law from parliament ? a joke; a name with legal rights ? a joke; a name permanently ? a joke, and many more, if you read the poem more and more;
Thanking you once again for writing assuring me (not jokingly, LOL) to read the jokes and giving me a higher rating only if you understand the jokes.
Wishing you every success in your chosen goal in writing,
With best regards,
God bless!
Alcreator Litt Dear
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Comment from Sally Law
It hard to get any good laws passed these days and Daniels worries are justified. I like you humorous poem, methinks you are right, much ado about the many.
Sending you my best today as well,
Sally :+)
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It hard to get any good laws passed these days and Daniels worries are justified. I like you humorous poem, methinks you are right, much ado about the many.
Sending you my best today as well,
Sally :+)
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019
Comment from Blue Hendrix
these prompts are getting out of control with all the requirements but I think you have nailed them all great job. You deserve a "5" simply for trying. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
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these prompts are getting out of control with all the requirements but I think you have nailed them all great job. You deserve a "5" simply for trying. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2019
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Call Father A Father!", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. To me, this is a six, but unfortunately I only have fives left.
I look forward to seeing your next post.
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"Call Father A Father!", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. To me, this is a six, but unfortunately I only have fives left.
I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2019
Comment from DonandVicki
I had to read your poem several times to get the jist of the joke, but never the less I enjoy reading your work for the shear inspiration of your words. Keep up the imaginative good work.
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I had to read your poem several times to get the jist of the joke, but never the less I enjoy reading your work for the shear inspiration of your words. Keep up the imaginative good work.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2019
Comment from Cindy Warren
That's cute. Nemeless relation is a weird tradition. Yep, Bhya really needs to fix that. LOL This was a fun read that gave me a good laugh. I think it should have won the contest last year.
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That's cute. Nemeless relation is a weird tradition. Yep, Bhya really needs to fix that. LOL This was a fun read that gave me a good laugh. I think it should have won the contest last year.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2019
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
I don't know who is coming up with these prompts, but I think they keep forgetting to take their meds. I am not even going to check if this meets all of these whacky requirements. You deserve a "5" simply for trying. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
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I don't know who is coming up with these prompts, but I think they keep forgetting to take their meds. I am not even going to check if this meets all of these whacky requirements. You deserve a "5" simply for trying. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2019
Comment from Joy Graham
This is an enjoyable poem about goat generations wanting names. I love the picture as it gives a perfect visual to put the reader into the story. I always thought their name was Billy, but I guess they want their own names so they can have individuality. I gotta laugh, and will likely think of these goats all day :)
Joy xx
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This is an enjoyable poem about goat generations wanting names. I love the picture as it gives a perfect visual to put the reader into the story. I always thought their name was Billy, but I guess they want their own names so they can have individuality. I gotta laugh, and will likely think of these goats all day :)
Joy xx
Comment Written 09-Jul-2019