Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

A fun fantasy ride, where your imagination flies free on a 'unicorn steed'. The last line of the second stanza isn't quite in step with the internal rhyme too early in the syllable count, but that is strict to form and doesn't distract from the enjoyable read.
cheers.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2018

Thanks Pearl, I?m always open to constructive comments, I fixed it to perfection LOL
Hugs,Trisha

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written florette about imagination and some fairy fun that we sometimes take time for daydreaming to play a great story in our minds that may become our next poem or story.

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018

As always, many thanks for your kind review,
Hugs, Trisha

reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018

As always, many thanks for your kind review,
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from heart of Lou

Excellent

Amazing! I never heard of potlatch before, and it looks pretty complicated. I couldn't figure out what the last line of the first stanza means, so I'm wondering if you got an extra word in there, or if it's just my brain fog.

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2018

It means that they have wings they can use if they have to fly instead of riding. (Hope this helps you). It was a strange style challenge to.meet. I?m glad you felt comfortable enough to ask me about the syllabication etc.
I appreciate your review
Hugs,Trisha

Comment from Mary Hollingsworth

Excellent

Bucket list you know the imaginations and take you on a journey Adventures some of them wind up to be one way. Meaning you can get so deep into it and so engrossed into it that you get lost and don't know how to differentiate imaginary things from reality and that could be dangerous but to each his own. Nice poem thank you

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2018

Thank you very much Mary
Hugs, Trisha

reply by Mary Hollingsworth on 14-Sep-2018

Kisses back at ya
with a big old hug!

reply by the author on 14-Sep-2018

Holla, bless your big ol hug!

reply by Mary Hollingsworth on 14-Sep-2018

👍

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A fun write and dreaming takes us to the fantasy world of our imagininings and gives us a break from reality, a fun ride on a unicorn here Trisha, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2018

Thanks, Dolly
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from meeshu

Excellent

I really like the images and the whimsy of this poem, Bucket. I am having trouble with the meter and cadence, though. the last line in each verse throws me off. could be reader trouble.................meeshu

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2018

Hi, meeshu. I added the rules for this style in the notes. Mybe that will help explain the diversity of line 4s. Thank you so much for reviewing
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Very nice image and presentation, Trisha.
-Good imagery, rhyme, and flow to your poem.
-It has a very happy mood, as well.
-I like how you begin with imagination,
as that is such an important element.
-I like this line, "I've wings of hues,
long hair of red" and the reference
to "butterfly groups."
-A good conclusion; thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2018

Thanks for your supportive and complimentary review Pam. These challenges of style are sometimes frustrating. The good side is the old brain muscles get exercised, and the thrill of reviews.
Hugs, Trisha

reply by Pam (respa) on 13-Sep-2018

You are very welcome, Trisha. Challenges can be frustrating, but after you accomplish it, then it is rewarding.

reply by the author on 13-Sep-2018

Wise words, thank you!