Comment from Liberty Justice

Excellent

GOOD luck in contest. You got my thumbs up. Your poem is so breezy, delightful and filled with hope for much cooler weather. Your poem is so refreshing. Right now we are getting much needed break. Temperatures been in 70s and 80s instead of 100s. Check out mine, also. liberty justice

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2018

Thank you for your supportive and positive insights! We are loving the cooler weather. Will definitely check out your work.

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Well that does it! This lovely poem proves without a shadow of doubt the letter A can be dispensed with. LOL.

That said, terrific poem and fine entry into the contest. Best of luck to you. This is a lovely poem.

Gloria

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2018

Thank you, Gloria, for stopping in to review this poem - let's see what else we can dispense with in the alphabet. Who needs 26 letters???

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks how comforting and energetic the breezes in September, Nature is getting soothing with the sun, freshness and green environment make living enjoying; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018

Thank you!