Funny Honey
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Comment from LaRosa
Rhonnie, I love this poem. You have a wonderful sense of humor and a talent for using colloquialism. 'They' often tell us not to do that; but your poem/story is a perfect example that it works if done right.
This would make a great little book for kids.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018
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Rhonnie, I love this poem. You have a wonderful sense of humor and a talent for using colloquialism. 'They' often tell us not to do that; but your poem/story is a perfect example that it works if done right.
This would make a great little book for kids.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018
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HELLO LaRosa: I regret that it took me so long to thank you for your helpful and encouraging review. I am so backed up in my agenda, that everything is backed up for now. But I'm working on it. Since humor is in the heart of the reader, it is you that have a wonderful sense of humor. When I went to children's writer school, they taught me to do it, "RIGHT," first. Then it's okay to bend it a little. That, they taught me, will create my unique voice. According to you. They taught me right. Thank you for the stars. I appreciate them. Cordially: rhonnie69.
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Now that makes me feel good too! :)
Comment from heart of Lou
What a hilarious twist on 'the tortoise and the hare" story. I think Jack and Woody better get some sleep until Portise comes back with that board. They are quite the lazy fools for sending such a slowpoke back there!
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What a hilarious twist on 'the tortoise and the hare" story. I think Jack and Woody better get some sleep until Portise comes back with that board. They are quite the lazy fools for sending such a slowpoke back there!
Comment Written 12-Sep-2018