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Of Hearts and Heartaches

Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Words From the Heart"
Poems about falling in or out of love.

3 total reviews 
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
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Very colorful, Correct syllables and lines. Im enchanted by the bold colors of the artwork. and after just observing the artwork. Im thinking of the the veins that the heart pumps the blood through. Very good job. Much luck to you in the contest. Even if you win

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2018

reply by the author on 13-Sep-2018
    THANK YOU.
reply by Mary Hollingsworth on 13-Sep-2018
    my pleasure
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks we do not care or bother about the outcome, result, fruition, effect or reaction of words that come out of heart or by heart, uncontrollable; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2018

reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
    Thank you once again for the rating and comments you have given to my works.
Comment from Jacqueline O.
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I loved the simplicity of the poem- taking an idea that is familiar and well-versed to many, of not most of us, and rendering it into a concise, palatable retelling is no small undertaking. You also followed a set syllable stress pattern, which gave it a nice flow. Great work!

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2018

reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
    Thank you. I am most grateful for the excellent rating and wonderful comments.