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8 total reviews
Comment from frogbook
Interesting thoughts well presented in this introspective poem. Pleasing visual presentation also, good color and picture.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2018
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Interesting thoughts well presented in this introspective poem. Pleasing visual presentation also, good color and picture.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2018
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Thanks, I appreciate your kind review,
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the end of our lives that will come one or other time and we should prepare our souls to know where the everlasting life with God can be find, and acceptance that our bodies will stay behind.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2018
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A very well-written poem about the end of our lives that will come one or other time and we should prepare our souls to know where the everlasting life with God can be find, and acceptance that our bodies will stay behind.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2018
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I apppreciate your reviews, Sandra
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from oliver818
I enjoyed your poem. It expresses a sad truth, in a powerful and beautiful way. I especially enjoyed the ending. Thanks for sharing this great piece and have a great day
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2018
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I enjoyed your poem. It expresses a sad truth, in a powerful and beautiful way. I especially enjoyed the ending. Thanks for sharing this great piece and have a great day
Comment Written 07-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2018
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Hi, Oliver! Thank you for reading my poetry and for your complimentary review
Hugs, Trisha
Enjoy life!
Comment from A Fractal Heart
This is a poignant and thought provoking piece, thank you for sharing it. Death is something that is difficult for most people to write about simply because it really is the BIG unknown in life.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2018
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This is a poignant and thought provoking piece, thank you for sharing it. Death is something that is difficult for most people to write about simply because it really is the BIG unknown in life.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2018
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It was difficult for me, but forced me to acknowledge the fact that we DONT know when.. I thank you for your positive review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow- such a poignant piece that speaks of dying and the state of being that comes just before...and your comparison of anesthesia to what it may be like almost makes one not want to ever have surgery! :) ;) I do remember the last two surgeries, though, and you're right, in a way, you feel yourself fading and your vision finally disappears before the sounds and then...waking up. Your write certainly gives the reader a lot to think about...Thank you for sharing! :) Yvette :)
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2018
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Wow- such a poignant piece that speaks of dying and the state of being that comes just before...and your comparison of anesthesia to what it may be like almost makes one not want to ever have surgery! :) ;) I do remember the last two surgeries, though, and you're right, in a way, you feel yourself fading and your vision finally disappears before the sounds and then...waking up. Your write certainly gives the reader a lot to think about...Thank you for sharing! :) Yvette :)
Comment Written 07-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2018
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Thanks so much Yvette for your positive review, celebrate life this week (oh, and after lol) hugs, Trisha
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Bucketlist your poem Death and Dying with
alternate rhyme stanzas doesn't leave a reviewer
should have no fear of death, after all it's going to take place it's part of live.
Gert
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2018
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Hello Bucketlist your poem Death and Dying with
alternate rhyme stanzas doesn't leave a reviewer
should have no fear of death, after all it's going to take place it's part of live.
Gert
Comment Written 07-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2018
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I don?t think it?s fear of death itself, I think it?s pain, or suffering, combined , or with the uncertainty of when. Thanks for reviewing
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Marie Foster1
The last poem I read was also about death. Must be a lot of baby-boomers on here :) I believe, I am a born-again christian, that death will place me in heaven. Where there will be peace, joy and no more pain. Those who have had out-of-body experiences after dying, return with stories of visiting heaven. Some of visiting hell. I know where I wish to spend eternity :) Excellent imagery ...especially the comparison of memories to a cruise ship. Excellent job!!
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2018
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The last poem I read was also about death. Must be a lot of baby-boomers on here :) I believe, I am a born-again christian, that death will place me in heaven. Where there will be peace, joy and no more pain. Those who have had out-of-body experiences after dying, return with stories of visiting heaven. Some of visiting hell. I know where I wish to spend eternity :) Excellent imagery ...especially the comparison of memories to a cruise ship. Excellent job!!
Comment Written 07-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2018
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Marie, thank you for your super review, enjoy LIFE,
Hugs, Trish
Comment from estory
The rigid construction of the rhythm and rhyme scheme here really expresses that sense of being unable to break out of life's confining parameters; especially death. you kind of speak of these things in very black and white terms; you are either good or bad, and going to heaven or hell, but then at the end there is that sense of just fading away, into an undefined haze. its kind of high contrast. I think you have to decide what kind of experience this is going to be; peaceful, or listening to that gavel fall in the court room. estory
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2018
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The rigid construction of the rhythm and rhyme scheme here really expresses that sense of being unable to break out of life's confining parameters; especially death. you kind of speak of these things in very black and white terms; you are either good or bad, and going to heaven or hell, but then at the end there is that sense of just fading away, into an undefined haze. its kind of high contrast. I think you have to decide what kind of experience this is going to be; peaceful, or listening to that gavel fall in the court room. estory
Comment Written 07-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2018
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Thank you very much for your opinion in review.
