Frozen Hearts
A Tetractys9 total reviews
Comment from EnvisionFAR
Thank you very much for using my work to accompany your beautiful poem.
You chose the perfect words to match the syllable requirements and to make a meaningful point that provokes moving emotion and thought. I'm happy to have had a photo that goes with your work so perfectly.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2018
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Thank you very much for using my work to accompany your beautiful poem.
You chose the perfect words to match the syllable requirements and to make a meaningful point that provokes moving emotion and thought. I'm happy to have had a photo that goes with your work so perfectly.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2018
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Thank you for sharing your work!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Tetractys poem. A child is very sensitive and can quickly feel unloved when others around them are treating them without love or care they will feel alone.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2018
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A very well-written Tetractys poem. A child is very sensitive and can quickly feel unloved when others around them are treating them without love or care they will feel alone.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2018
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I am glad you understood where this poem was coming from. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Comment from Joan E.
Your use of the Tetractys form to frame your message is very effective. The artwork you selected parallels the theme, and the final line is quite compelling. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
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Your use of the Tetractys form to frame your message is very effective. The artwork you selected parallels the theme, and the final line is quite compelling. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 06-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
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Thank you for reading and sharing your insights. It is much appreciated.
Comment from hari anand
This one really moved me how you relate frozen leaf's life to a child who sufffers the repercussions of cold indifferences between parents... Extraordinary
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
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This one really moved me how you relate frozen leaf's life to a child who sufffers the repercussions of cold indifferences between parents... Extraordinary
Comment Written 06-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
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Thank you very much for reading and sharing your insights. And for the generous rating! It is most encouraging.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello author
What you said in your Tetractys poem for the contest is perfect of how a child feel if they are neglected or abused
Best to you in this contest.
Gert
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
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Hello author
What you said in your Tetractys poem for the contest is perfect of how a child feel if they are neglected or abused
Best to you in this contest.
Gert
Comment Written 06-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
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Thank you for sharing your insights!
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You are welcome author
Gert
Comment from His Grayness
My thanks to this author for a fine example of this somewhat rare form of poetry which is certainly new to me. I can only rate it on delight and thanks for a fine read! HIS GRAYNESS
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
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My thanks to this author for a fine example of this somewhat rare form of poetry which is certainly new to me. I can only rate it on delight and thanks for a fine read! HIS GRAYNESS
Comment Written 06-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
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Appreciate very much your taking the time to read and review!
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My thanks to YOU! INDEED~!
Comment from Nanny 6
Well, so far this is the first poem that I read that has syllables right for this type of poem. You poem brings a vivid image of a coldhearted person neglecting a child. Good luck in the contest.
Judy
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
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Well, so far this is the first poem that I read that has syllables right for this type of poem. You poem brings a vivid image of a coldhearted person neglecting a child. Good luck in the contest.
Judy
Comment Written 06-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review !
Comment from Alexander Vasa
Hi, this is a very poignant poem. The image of the leaf frozen in the snow works so well and is a wonderful image to represent the early departure of a child. I noticed no errors and found this poem a pleasure to read and review, cheers, Ana.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
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Hi, this is a very poignant poem. The image of the leaf frozen in the snow works so well and is a wonderful image to represent the early departure of a child. I noticed no errors and found this poem a pleasure to read and review, cheers, Ana.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
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Thank you for taking the time to drop by and read my work.
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
What a sad but compelling message of truth in your tetractys poem. This is a well-written short poem filled with powerful emotions. I hope you do well in the contest. You have a solid entry!
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
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What a sad but compelling message of truth in your tetractys poem. This is a well-written short poem filled with powerful emotions. I hope you do well in the contest. You have a solid entry!
Comment Written 06-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
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Thank you for sharing your insights. It's sad but a realistic commentary. It's what I thought of when I saw the frozen heart shaped leaf.