I Wish I Was a Bird
Tetractys3 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
I could hear my teachers telling me "were" was required. You nailed it, as they say. Not many seem to know that grammatical rule. If you were a bird in Vermont ,USA, you definitely want to go south and not come back too soon. This was fun to read and catch on to your imagery. Well written. I am voting for this.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2018
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I could hear my teachers telling me "were" was required. You nailed it, as they say. Not many seem to know that grammatical rule. If you were a bird in Vermont ,USA, you definitely want to go south and not come back too soon. This was fun to read and catch on to your imagery. Well written. I am voting for this.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2018
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Dear Liz, Thank you for your comments, rating and vote.
Comment from BlueTiger
Nice work; I think you picked a great subject for this type of poem. These lines feel like a bird slowly drifting through the air...good job, and best of luck on the contest!
Sincerely,
-BT
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
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Nice work; I think you picked a great subject for this type of poem. These lines feel like a bird slowly drifting through the air...good job, and best of luck on the contest!
Sincerely,
-BT
Comment Written 06-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
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Dear Blue Tiger, Thank you for your comments and rating. Dove Thanks for wishing me luck.
Comment from fm wright
A perfect entry for the Tetractys poetry contest. It flows and while doing so follows the criteria for this poem type. The picture works very well with it. Also it shows a completeness of thought. Well written. Best of wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
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A perfect entry for the Tetractys poetry contest. It flows and while doing so follows the criteria for this poem type. The picture works very well with it. Also it shows a completeness of thought. Well written. Best of wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
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Dear fm wright, Thank you for your comments and rating, thanks for wishing me the best in the contest. Dove
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You're welcome, Dove.