Comment from frogbook

Excellent

I see the loss was felt more by the 4th who could not sleep thinking of his cold hands-haha. Clever and attention grabbing little write here.

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2018

I thought a German flavor would be funny.

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

This is worth a five just for the adorable picture of the kittens. Clever use of the German dialect. It seems the only logical to do if you've lost your mittens would be to take a nap. It's like Scarlet saying "I'll think about it tomorrow." They're keeping warm anyway, all snuggled up together. judi

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2018

Thanks, Judi

reply by judiverse on 10-Sep-2018

You're welcome. Love those Kittens. judi

Comment from donette1914

Excellent

so adorable i want to hold them so bad!!!
well chosen words that you used
this is a very well penned poem
very nice artwork
it was a pleasure to read
thank you for sharing
donette1914 Sep, 8th 2018

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2018

Thanks, Donette.

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

And I guess the little wide awake guy there in the front us the cause of the 'loss'...?! :) :) A fun 5-7-5 with the unique 'Colonel Klink' air to it - lol! :) :) Thanx for sharing! ;)Yvette

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2018

Thanks, Yvette.

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Yes and guess what the three dreamt of, three blind mice of course. The fourth? He went out and found them, ate them all and shamed his three hungry brother for being too lazy to go out and get themselves some lunch.

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018

That's why the fourth never gets mentioned, I guess.

Comment from Cass Carlton

Excellent

They are gorgeous little creatures aren't they? Und vy vas das Momma not for looking for das mittens? 'cos Momma vas veary vis all the babies crying all the night und keeping her avake. While babies vere shleeping Momma vas shleeping too. Nice one Bill cheers Cass

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018

Thanks, Cass.

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

So my guess is, the name of the rebel kitty cat in the foreground is Mittens. You likely wrote that and I just missed it.

Very cute poem, Bill and a pleasure to read today.

Gloria

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018

Thank you, Gloria, for looking at this. Bill

Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

Hi Bill. A German satire, eh? Why did you choose to do that. What in German is was. But if you used that people would confuse it with the English word. Clever. Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018

It's English with a German or Yiddish accent. "What" replaces who in the dialect as the relative clause starter, and 'vat' is the vernacular expression.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written and cute 5-7-5 poem about the three little kittens that lost their mittens and then took a nap. You used very cute words and very cute imagery from the adorable picture. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018

Thanks, Teri

Comment from June Sargent

Excellent

What a cute little poem! And the photograph is adorable! You can probably tell I am a cat lover. My cat is very annoyed with me now as I am not petting her, but tapping words onto a phone! Good job. I enjoyed the read.

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018

Thanks, June