Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello and smiles rhonnie69
I had a big smile while I was reading the dialogue between Amie and Jamie so I guess Jamie know his twin Amie is smarter when
(has a clever twist answer)
Gert

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2018

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Good image choice.
-I am enjoying your humor
poetry with good characters
and dialogue, and a good
twist at the end.
-I like the discussion Amie and
Jamie have about all kinds of things.
-The twist was good with Amie's
answer, but they were still
twins and friends in the end.

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2018

Comment from JanPerry

Good

Very sweet poetry which plays on words. Twins essentially means they were born at the same time, or close to it.
In this instance, it's not related to them being the same in every way, so technically your poem is wrong. Sorry if I'm mean, however, it still has elements of humour in it.

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018

HELLO JanPerry: Thank you for viewing my poem. I appreciate that. My family has three sets of twins. My sisters are identical twins. One of their daughters had identical twins, both girls. My niece had twins, a girl and a boy. During that time we became familiar with what twins. are... "Hey diddle diddle, the cat and the fiddle, the cow jumped over the moon. The little dog laughed to see such a sport, and the dish ran away with the spoon." This is one of the most famous poems ever written. Can a poem be technically wrong, my friend? You're not mean. You're just trying to help me. I appreciate that. Thank you. God bless you, JanPerry. Cordially: rhonnie69.