Shackles
Closed mind, closed heart12 total reviews
Comment from Poetic Friend
Okay, this has got to be one of the most restricted poetic forms, but you mastered it creatively.
The metaphor that you used has many layers and themes. Amazing, amazing work.
Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2018
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Okay, this has got to be one of the most restricted poetic forms, but you mastered it creatively.
The metaphor that you used has many layers and themes. Amazing, amazing work.
Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 03-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2018
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Thank you so much for the wonderful review.
Comment from RodG
The prompt would shackle me, yet you have worked within its parameters very well. How many of us are SELF-RESTRICTED because of our background or cultural upbringing so we do not think for ourselves? Freedom, as you point out, lies within. A message that bears repeating often.
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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2018
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The prompt would shackle me, yet you have worked within its parameters very well. How many of us are SELF-RESTRICTED because of our background or cultural upbringing so we do not think for ourselves? Freedom, as you point out, lies within. A message that bears repeating often.
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Comment Written 03-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2018
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Thanks for the great review.
