Dog Dog
A real picture of me holding my precious Dog Dog13 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
An insight into a dog's favourite toy and this is a very personal write with special memories, I wish you luck with the contest, I enjoyed your words, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
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An insight into a dog's favourite toy and this is a very personal write with special memories, I wish you luck with the contest, I enjoyed your words, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
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Thank you so much for reading.
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Dog Dog, is very precious and meaningful to me and , I'm sure. many other readers. An experience with a stuffed toy lasts forever.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
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This poem, Dog Dog, is very precious and meaningful to me and , I'm sure. many other readers. An experience with a stuffed toy lasts forever.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
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Thank you for such a nice review. :)
Comment from jenintorre
This is a lovely and poignant poem about dog dog, told in excellent rhyme and meter. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Best wishes. Jen.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
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This is a lovely and poignant poem about dog dog, told in excellent rhyme and meter. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Best wishes. Jen.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
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Thank you so much for your kind words.
Comment from royowen
I think most have a special toy that's possibly hidden away in the corner of their memory or mind, to remind them of a special toy. (I don't think any of mine lasted long enough to make an impression. A beautifully written entry in this contest in slightly changing lined syllable count, abcb rhymed quatrains, well done, good entry, good luck, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2018
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I think most have a special toy that's possibly hidden away in the corner of their memory or mind, to remind them of a special toy. (I don't think any of mine lasted long enough to make an impression. A beautifully written entry in this contest in slightly changing lined syllable count, abcb rhymed quatrains, well done, good entry, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 04-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2018
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Thank you for this nice review. :)
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Most welcome
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about a favorite toy. It seems we all prefer the one in a million toys that stands out above all the other commercial toys, the one that seems uniquely handmade with love.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2018
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A very well-written poem about a favorite toy. It seems we all prefer the one in a million toys that stands out above all the other commercial toys, the one that seems uniquely handmade with love.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2018
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I think that's true. Thank you for your kind words.
Comment from LynnetteOK
Isn't it wonderful how something so simple could be such an important part of childhood? A stuffed animal (or Raggedy Ann doll, in my case) would go on every adventure, absorb every tear, and keep every secret.
Very well written.
Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2018
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Isn't it wonderful how something so simple could be such an important part of childhood? A stuffed animal (or Raggedy Ann doll, in my case) would go on every adventure, absorb every tear, and keep every secret.
Very well written.
Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2018
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Thank you for reading and reviewing, it's much appreciated.
Comment from kahpot
Excellent and yes most if not all have a favorite toy that in some way becomes their security blanket, this was a wonderful read and great entry in this competition, my best wishes****kahpot
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2018
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Excellent and yes most if not all have a favorite toy that in some way becomes their security blanket, this was a wonderful read and great entry in this competition, my best wishes****kahpot
Comment Written 03-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2018
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Thank you for this nice review, I'm always glad to hear from you.
Comment from Hugh McDowell
I think it is a very sweet, not silly story! Well written with great pace and flow. It's amazing how certain inanimate items can mean the world to us. Excellent. Hugh
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018
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I think it is a very sweet, not silly story! Well written with great pace and flow. It's amazing how certain inanimate items can mean the world to us. Excellent. Hugh
Comment Written 03-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018
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Thank you for this nice review, I always appreciate it.
Comment from Poetic Friend
Yes, we all had favorite toys as kids. It was so much fun reading about yours, which Dog Dog seemed like a comfort blanket.
Unfortunately, these days kids' favorite toys'are video games, which sometimes stripped children of imagination and creativity.
I love this poem.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018
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Yes, we all had favorite toys as kids. It was so much fun reading about yours, which Dog Dog seemed like a comfort blanket.
Unfortunately, these days kids' favorite toys'are video games, which sometimes stripped children of imagination and creativity.
I love this poem.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018
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You are so right about video games. They are so realistic that no imagination is required. Kind of makes me sad. Thanks so much for taking time to read my poem.
Comment from Renee J. St.Germain
This is a cute poem about a favorite toy. It makes me smile and it's a cozy feeling. You're right, I'm sure we all have had that favorite toy. I remember a stuffed doll I had. She was purple and 3 feet tall. I can remember dragging her along the floor everywhere I went. Even as an adult, I didn't quite want to give her up.
The only question I have is in this sentence:
"than he started to fall apart." Do you mean then?
Other than that, I think think this poem is excellent. I love the rhyming and it flows nicely.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018
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This is a cute poem about a favorite toy. It makes me smile and it's a cozy feeling. You're right, I'm sure we all have had that favorite toy. I remember a stuffed doll I had. She was purple and 3 feet tall. I can remember dragging her along the floor everywhere I went. Even as an adult, I didn't quite want to give her up.
The only question I have is in this sentence:
"than he started to fall apart." Do you mean then?
Other than that, I think think this poem is excellent. I love the rhyming and it flows nicely.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018
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Thank you for pointing out that error, I always appreciate it. Thanks for reading my poem and for the nice review, it made my day.
