Comment from
lyenochka
There is something beautiful about the return of the seasons that have a sense of something returning and continuing forever. I like the personification of Time and Nature as well as the season.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018
Comment from
mermaids
Excellent use of words that captures the impact of winter, harshness but nature is always reborn. Your poetic form creates a clear scene and feel for the winter season. Best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2018
Thank you for your wonderful review.
Comment from
heart of Lou
Very good personification of winter. Your angle of the circle of life is well done, as is the determination not to give up, but try again next year.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2018
Thank you for your kind words.