Selections For Book Project
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Conquering Everest"possible selections for inclusion in book project
9 total reviews
Comment from Lady Jane
Another unique penning to this contest. The flow of this piece was chosen to represent the ascending and descending summits of frosty Everest, correct? I see the personification dripping down the screen as I read this. With the flick of my fingertip, what an image. Nicely done, writer. This is just penned flawlessly and great form and honestly captures winter's essence! Good luck in the contest.
Janelle
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018
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Another unique penning to this contest. The flow of this piece was chosen to represent the ascending and descending summits of frosty Everest, correct? I see the personification dripping down the screen as I read this. With the flick of my fingertip, what an image. Nicely done, writer. This is just penned flawlessly and great form and honestly captures winter's essence! Good luck in the contest.
Janelle
Comment Written 01-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018
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I'm so pleased you found this successful. Thanks a million. mike
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written personification of winter poem. The throne of Mr Winter is at mount Everest where many sacrifices were made over the years when human tried to reach the summit he sweeps them off with an ice-cold finger.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018
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A very well-written personification of winter poem. The throne of Mr Winter is at mount Everest where many sacrifices were made over the years when human tried to reach the summit he sweeps them off with an ice-cold finger.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018
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Thanks kindly, Sandra. Mike :))
Comment from kahpot
what an excellent view from a most "majestic" Mountain awaiting and deciding if the small ones (human) will be allowed to defeat it, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018
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what an excellent view from a most "majestic" Mountain awaiting and deciding if the small ones (human) will be allowed to defeat it, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 01-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018
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Pleased you enjoyed. Thanks a million, mike :))
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A descriptive write with great imagery here and those men are indeed very brave to conquer and some lose their life in the process, you mastered the art of the free write here, thoroughly enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018
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A descriptive write with great imagery here and those men are indeed very brave to conquer and some lose their life in the process, you mastered the art of the free write here, thoroughly enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018
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Thanks so much, Dolly. Love free verse though I try the rest. :)) mike
Comment from Gloria ....
What a terrific entry into the contest this is. Talk about a little sinister in the ministry of winter. It's not just soft little white snowflakes and fluff after all, but rather a masterful poser.
Great job and best of luck to you in the contest. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018
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What a terrific entry into the contest this is. Talk about a little sinister in the ministry of winter. It's not just soft little white snowflakes and fluff after all, but rather a masterful poser.
Great job and best of luck to you in the contest. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 01-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018
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Sinister in the ministry-- love that line. Thanks so much, Gloria. Picked up ten bucks, so, pretty good luck. :)) mike
Comment from meeshu
this is a great work, I knew as I read that the vindictive Winter would have the last word. a great piece with outstanding verbiage and flow..
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018
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this is a great work, I knew as I read that the vindictive Winter would have the last word. a great piece with outstanding verbiage and flow..
Comment Written 01-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018
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HA!!!! Saw it coming, eh? LOL Thanks so much. :)) mike
Comment from Raul1
The snow fumbles down the mountain leaving nothing unturned and then there's nothing in its sight. At least that's what I think your viewpoint of this is in your poem. Excellent poem! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018
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The snow fumbles down the mountain leaving nothing unturned and then there's nothing in its sight. At least that's what I think your viewpoint of this is in your poem. Excellent poem! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 31-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018
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Yep, you have it on the money, Raul. Well put. Thanks a million. mike ;))
Comment from LeftHandedScribe
If ever there was personality in a personification, this is it! You capture whimsy, arrogance, pride and delight all in one poem. This mountain ain't playing second fiddle to nobody!
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018
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If ever there was personality in a personification, this is it! You capture whimsy, arrogance, pride and delight all in one poem. This mountain ain't playing second fiddle to nobody!
Comment Written 31-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018
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Personification is my favourite, especially of winter. Pleased you enjoyed. Thanks so much. mike
Comment from Kelly Hanna
I really liked the description. It was neat that you chose Everest. The photo was very cool too. Good job!........................................................................
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018
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I really liked the description. It was neat that you chose Everest. The photo was very cool too. Good job!........................................................................
Comment Written 31-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018
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He, Kelly
Nice to meet you and pleased you enjoyed. Welcome, mike