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Viewing comments for Chapter 54 " You cain't Hide. Gonna' Find Ya'"A Witty Ditty Anthology
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Comment from Maltiti Stavros
I love it, the formatting, use of kid slang and chopping of words was perfect. I don't have any notes for you, except that it wasn't until I read this that I realized we said one of those lines wrong my whole childhood! We always said, "Ollie, ollie, oxen free!" Never knew why, now I know. Thanks for contributing.
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I love it, the formatting, use of kid slang and chopping of words was perfect. I don't have any notes for you, except that it wasn't until I read this that I realized we said one of those lines wrong my whole childhood! We always said, "Ollie, ollie, oxen free!" Never knew why, now I know. Thanks for contributing.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2018
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks about playing a game, how the players are on their way to win and making scores, good interaction while playing and plan for changing players; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
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This speaks about playing a game, how the players are on their way to win and making scores, good interaction while playing and plan for changing players; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 31-Aug-2018