Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Donna, This is a very well written antonym poem about old or young at heart. I think it is in our mind at times, even though we have the aches and pains that go with old age. I have learned I can pain at any age or keep on going and enjoy my life the best I can with the help of the Lord. Good job! love, Teri

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2018

Dear Teri, Thank you for your comments and rating. Love, Donna

reply by Teri7 on 30-Aug-2018

you are so welcome my friend! love, Teri

Comment from phill doran

Excellent

Hello DoveMarie
A lovey Antonym - and like all good Antonyms, reversible too!
Young
at heart;
old
It is a great tragedy (for every generation since the year dot) that some are born old and stay that way and some are born young and also stick to that mindset. They pass each other in their 40's I think!
As I say, a lovely piece: I wish you well with your continued writing.
cheers
phill

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2018

Dear phill, Thank you for your comments and review. Dovemarie

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written short poem/statement about a young person that seems to have an old heart. It is strange sometimes to see a young child with the wisdom of an older person.

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2018

Dear Sandra, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove