Funny Honey
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Comment from Kelly Hanna
Good job! I enjoyed the fun rhymes. The craft of the word provoked thought. I glad that I had a chance read this poem. Thanks for sharing with us!!..........................
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Good job! I enjoyed the fun rhymes. The craft of the word provoked thought. I glad that I had a chance read this poem. Thanks for sharing with us!!..........................
Comment Written 30-Aug-2018
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork and an interesting style
for your poem, rhonnie69.
-I like your character names,
and their dialogue.
-I like the beginning when
Ricky talks about not using 'r's."
-I also like the ending because
it is unexpected, like the train
coming down the track, but
you don't make it obvious.
-Thanks for sharing.
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-Good artwork and an interesting style
for your poem, rhonnie69.
-I like your character names,
and their dialogue.
-I like the beginning when
Ricky talks about not using 'r's."
-I also like the ending because
it is unexpected, like the train
coming down the track, but
you don't make it obvious.
-Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2018
