Comment from Judvan2

Exceptional

What a great to the point idea. I hope you win but I guess its selfish to want everyone to see the truth!!! Good luck to you in the contest. Inspired by the day to day twitter....

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2018

Thanks so much for the read, the comment and the wonderful rating. Much appreciated.

Comment from flylikeaneagle

Excellent

Here's your two cents.......great poem. Ha Ha Ha!
I'm glad that the world sees through eyes of John McCain
for awhile instead of Pres t. He wasn't invited.....

When we care more for others than ourselves, dreams
can become real. Pres t hasn't done anything for so many.
McCain was a person we can learn from. flylikeaneagle

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2018

Could not agree with you more. Thanks for the read and the comments.

Comment from poetwatch

Excellent

Please say it isn't so author. Narcissus was a hunter with great beauty there is no comparison. Where beauty is in the eyes of the beholder many make mistakes for true beauty comes from inside and Trump's insides, well... they are shown on the outside, slimy. The only thing that Trump hunts is women--- and trouble for us. :) This is a good entry for the 10Word Poem.

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2018

Thanks the read and for your comments, I did forget the hunting part and just remembered being overcome by his own image.

Comment from LateBloomer

Excellent

Hello author, Very good, very timely. Good 2-10-2 format. Great complementary artwork choice. This poem made me laugh, albeit it sad in real life. As this is a writing prompt entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2018

Oh, yes. in my opinion, sad but true. Thank you for the read and the comment.

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks that Trump and Trump Presidency is so in violation of right to freedom or living in America that even Narcissus on his reflection into a pond finds Trump stared back at him; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2018

Thanks for the read and the encouraging words.

Comment from Kelly Hanna

Excellent

Very powerful. Whether agreed with or not. I stopped to think about this and wondered who might start back at me in my own one of reflection. Great work!

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2018

Wow, that is worth thinking about. I must do the same. Thanks for the read, review and the thought.

reply by Kelly Hanna on 29-Aug-2018

No problem.... I'm hoping for Athena to stare at me back from mine :)

reply by the author on 29-Aug-2018

I think Adonis for me, I love fantasy.