Right Under Her Nose
Or inside it...don't look!10 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written lowku poem. It is kind of disgusting to look at someone who without seemingly knowing they do it, scratching inside their nose in public, it is definitely low key.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2018
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A very well-written lowku poem. It is kind of disgusting to look at someone who without seemingly knowing they do it, scratching inside their nose in public, it is definitely low key.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2018
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Yep! That was pretty much what was called for: disgusting! :) Thanx for the review, Sandra -- glad you stopped by! ;) :)
Comment from Debbie Pope
I love this!! Digging for treasure is such a poetic way to say picking your nose. "Secret treasure trove." That is a priceless metaphor. I have never read one more disgusting. Your last line should win it for you.
Good luck. Unfortunately I see several nose picking entries. Yours is exceptionally well written though. You could easily win.
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I love this!! Digging for treasure is such a poetic way to say picking your nose. "Secret treasure trove." That is a priceless metaphor. I have never read one more disgusting. Your last line should win it for you.
Good luck. Unfortunately I see several nose picking entries. Yours is exceptionally well written though. You could easily win.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2018
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Yep! That was pretty much what was called for: poetic grossness! :) Thanx for the review, Debbie, my friend -- glad you stopped by! ;) :)
Comment from ciliverde
Ugh I remember some classmates in grade school who would do this, and some who ate erasers, and the Elmers Glue out the the pots. WHY??!! Well, you have managed to gross out at least one reader, and brought back a few not-very-nostalgic memories from Rattlesnake GS, Missoula mt :))
Carol
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Ugh I remember some classmates in grade school who would do this, and some who ate erasers, and the Elmers Glue out the the pots. WHY??!! Well, you have managed to gross out at least one reader, and brought back a few not-very-nostalgic memories from Rattlesnake GS, Missoula mt :))
Carol
Comment Written 29-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2018
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Yep - disgusting then and disgusting now! LOL That was pretty much what was called for: gross! :) Thanx for the review, ciliverde -- glad you stopped by! ;) :)
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
lol, This is a great Lowku poem, my friend. That picture is not very becoming for her. lol. Yuck! Well, it is the prompt. Gook luck! ~Kerry
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lol, This is a great Lowku poem, my friend. That picture is not very becoming for her. lol. Yuck! Well, it is the prompt. Gook luck! ~Kerry
Comment Written 29-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2018
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Yep! That was pretty much what was called for: Yuck! :) Thanx for the review, Kerry -- glad you stopped by! ;) :)
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You're very welcome. So sorry for the very late reply:) Enjoy your weekend.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh my goodness this is sort of disgusting! But also funny and amusing, picking one's nose is a nasty habit! But we all do it! Good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
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Oh my goodness this is sort of disgusting! But also funny and amusing, picking one's nose is a nasty habit! But we all do it! Good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2018
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Yep! That was pretty much what was called for: gross! :) Thanx for the review, Dolly -- glad you stopped by! ;) :)
Comment from Raul1
Yeah, you have picked the most gross and disgusting poem I have read. This is a very good job you did in this poem. Good luck in winning the contest! I think that it's good enough to win.
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Yeah, you have picked the most gross and disgusting poem I have read. This is a very good job you did in this poem. Good luck in winning the contest! I think that it's good enough to win.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2018
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Yep! That was pretty much what was called for: gross! :) Thanx for the review, Raul -- glad you stopped by! ;) :)
Comment from heart of Lou
Well, you sure hit the mark with a disgusting topic. It reminds me of my niece when she was two years old, when me, my mother, sister and others were on a long road trip. Grandma sat beside the little girl, who was so tired of driving and bored. And then to her mothers dismay, she insists that grandma looks at the booger she just pulled from her nose. EW!
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Well, you sure hit the mark with a disgusting topic. It reminds me of my niece when she was two years old, when me, my mother, sister and others were on a long road trip. Grandma sat beside the little girl, who was so tired of driving and bored. And then to her mothers dismay, she insists that grandma looks at the booger she just pulled from her nose. EW!
Comment Written 28-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2018
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Yep! That was pretty much what was called for: disgusting! :) Thanx for the review, Lou -- glad you stopped by! ;) :)
Comment from Kelly Hanna
This is great! Boogers! Haha! I'm glad to have read this. It had a light, laugh-y feel to it. Good luck with everything and good job......................
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This is great! Boogers! Haha! I'm glad to have read this. It had a light, laugh-y feel to it. Good luck with everything and good job......................
Comment Written 28-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2018
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Yep! That was pretty much what was called for: boogers (i.e., gross)! :) Thanx for the review, Kelly -- glad you stopped by! ;) :)
Comment from Bill Schott
This lowku, Right Under Her Nose, has the correct format and definitely finds a gross picture to accompany the brief poetic frame.
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This lowku, Right Under Her Nose, has the correct format and definitely finds a gross picture to accompany the brief poetic frame.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2018
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Yep! That was pretty much what was called for: gross! :) Thanx for the review, Bill -- glad you stopped by! ;) :)
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
YUCK, GROSS...but I understand that is exactly the nasty nature of this contest. Your "tasty treat" was a great ending for your Lowku poem. I wish you lots of luck in this weird, but a fun contest. :)
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2018
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YUCK, GROSS...but I understand that is exactly the nasty nature of this contest. Your "tasty treat" was a great ending for your Lowku poem. I wish you lots of luck in this weird, but a fun contest. :)
Comment Written 28-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2018
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Yep! That was pretty much what was called for: gross! :) Thanx for the review, Cindy -- glad you stopped by! ;) :)
