FAMILY TIES.
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Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello rhonnie69
I say that Bunny is a very wise little girl that her brother Sunny when she said
And your sister's wish, is is that you'll be
like our Dad."
Gert
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Hello rhonnie69
I say that Bunny is a very wise little girl that her brother Sunny when she said
And your sister's wish, is is that you'll be
like our Dad."
Gert
Comment Written 28-Aug-2018
Comment from LynnetteOK
This is a wonderful expression of the innocence of childhood. It's obvious they love each other very much. Bunny has such wisdom about her!
Very well written.
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This is a wonderful expression of the innocence of childhood. It's obvious they love each other very much. Bunny has such wisdom about her!
Very well written.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2018
Comment from KyColonel Randal
Thank you for sharing. This poem is a bit of a tear jerker. I keep wanting to add an extra syllable to the last line for meter, for example: "grow up like our Dad." Otherwise, the picture you chose for the illustration is perfect, and I enjoyed this very much.
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Thank you for sharing. This poem is a bit of a tear jerker. I keep wanting to add an extra syllable to the last line for meter, for example: "grow up like our Dad." Otherwise, the picture you chose for the illustration is perfect, and I enjoyed this very much.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2018