Comment from jenintorre

Excellent

I really like your 5-7-5 poem. I thought it was fascinating that you had a wolf for a pet. Very heartwarming. I wish you good luck in the competition. Best wishes. Jen.

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2018

Thank you so much for the excellent review and your kind words.

Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson

Excellent

Ohhh...How sad, left all alone. This is a nice little 5-7-5 pet entry.
I wish you luck! ~Kerry

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2018

Thank you so much for the excellent review and the wonderful words.

reply by Kerry Foley Robinson on 29-Aug-2018

My pleasure.

Comment from Liz O'Neill

Exceptional

I actually saw a wolf running powerfully down the hill, just before the turn up my road. I was coming home from work around midnight. What an honor. What a beautiful tribute this poem is to your boy. I'm sorry for your deep losses. I hope the reader can gain some appreciation of the spirit of the wolf and work to save them. Thank you. You have my vote.

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2018

Thank you exceedingly for the exceptional rating and kind words. I both humble and grateful.

Comment from Debbie Pope

Excellent

What a poignant poem. You know, wolves do that to me. You don't think first of their fierceness. You think of their gentleness. This is a good entry. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2018

Thank you so much for your rating and wonderful review. They are both much appreciated.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

You did a good job, Mystery Author, with your pet entry. Your syllables are correct per line. The picture is super, too. Thanks for the notes. Best wishes. Jan

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Aug-2018

Thank you so much for the excellent review and the words of encouragement.

Comment from Hugh McDowell

Excellent

Very nice. As so often with wild things, we are often given no notice of their final goodbye. A nice contrast between the dangerous perception of a wolf and the gentle goodbye. Poem has a bittersweet melancholy in it that I like. Excellent. Hugh

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Aug-2018

Thank you for your generous rating and kind review.

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

The concept is unique, a gentile wolf. I guess that means he won't eat me. The word of God promises that one day all animals would display this characteristic.

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Aug-2018

Thank you for the excellent rating and the comments. He seemed to have gotten his gentleness through his sire, who got it through his dam, who was bottle raised.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written 5-7-5 poem about Lonewolf. You used very good descriptive words and very sweet picture of the wolf. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2018

Thank you Teri7- you are very generous with your ratings and your kind words.

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Very well done on your unique verse about a unique pet. I would say that your short verse is reminiscent of a lost love instead of a pet. Either way, it's gives a sense of loss at a relationship that is no more. Good read.

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2018

Thank you, and yes it could read that way, but Lonewolf was a very special pet, whom I did and still do love, though he is no longer around. The excellent review is most welcome.

Comment from Adri7enne

Excellent

Ah, sad. It doesn't take long to fall completely in love with an animal. They are so accepting of their humans. It's as if we were Gods. Good 5-7-5, and I counted the syllables. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2018

Thank you for the excellent rating and the heartfelt remarks.