Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Wow! What a delightfully warm and oh-so-inviting beach you have created here with your wonderful prose!!! :) ;) And yes! I can see those stars and hear the frogs and cicadas.....just wow! Love this piece, Doc - gonna sit out here for a while longer and just listen.....and breathe......Thank you for the much needed 'beach break'!! :) :) Yvette ;)

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2018

Thanks Yvette and my new post will blow you away.
Dr Ricky 1024.

Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

Hi Ricky. I think this is the first actual poem of yours that I have read. It is very nice. I write a lot about transitions. Sunset to dusk, dusk to night, night to dawn and Dawn to day Transition is how I view this poem paralleling to your stage of grief. Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2018

Thanks Pamusart.
I had a lot of fun With this.
I will,write simular one later.
Ricky1024