Daybreak
Living in the moment15 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
Congratulations on having your 5-7-5 well received in the contest. I admired the mood you captured and your use of alliteration to intensify it, along with the parallel artwork you selected. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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Congratulations on having your 5-7-5 well received in the contest. I admired the mood you captured and your use of alliteration to intensify it, along with the parallel artwork you selected. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 10-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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Thank you.
Comment from dragonpoet
What a beautiful depiction of dawn in both words and artwork. It uses some good personification.
Congrats on placing in the contest.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2018
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What a beautiful depiction of dawn in both words and artwork. It uses some good personification.
Congrats on placing in the contest.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 10-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2018
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Thank you for the review and your wonderful comments. Melissa
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You are very welcome on both accounts.
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Comment from F. Wehr3
Nicely done five seven five, Melissa. I really thought you did a great job with this poem. it's almost got that haiku feeling to it. I hope it does well in the contest.
Take care,
Russell
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2018
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Nicely done five seven five, Melissa. I really thought you did a great job with this poem. it's almost got that haiku feeling to it. I hope it does well in the contest.
Take care,
Russell
Comment Written 25-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2018
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Thanks so much Russell. I appreciate your review and good comments. :)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 about a wonderful summer morning sunrise that wakes up the earth slowly until everything wakes from its sleep. A great photo that complements your poem perfectly.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2018
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A very well-written 5-7-5 about a wonderful summer morning sunrise that wakes up the earth slowly until everything wakes from its sleep. A great photo that complements your poem perfectly.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2018
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Thank you Sandra!
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi there,
Thank you for sharing your five-seven-five for the contest. The artwork you chose to compliment these words works well. I love to watch the sunrise, and since I wake up early, I usually take my morning coffee out and watch the summer sun come up. (In winter, I stay inside.)
Good luck to you in the contest,
~patty~
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2018
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Hi there,
Thank you for sharing your five-seven-five for the contest. The artwork you chose to compliment these words works well. I love to watch the sunrise, and since I wake up early, I usually take my morning coffee out and watch the summer sun come up. (In winter, I stay inside.)
Good luck to you in the contest,
~patty~
Comment Written 25-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2018
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Thanks so much Patty. Watching a sunrise is food for my soul. I can?t wait to see what the day brings. I?m grateful you took the time to review.
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
What a stunning choice of photo! Your words complement the photo so well. "The earth slowly wakes"... such poetic beauty! Nature is good to inspire us! I wish you lots of luck in the 5-7-5 contest. This is a solid entry.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2018
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What a stunning choice of photo! Your words complement the photo so well. "The earth slowly wakes"... such poetic beauty! Nature is good to inspire us! I wish you lots of luck in the 5-7-5 contest. This is a solid entry.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2018
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Thanks so much Cindy. I?m grateful you took the time to review.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your 575, Sugarray. Goo syllable count per line. Your picture is a great pairing with your words. I enjoyed reading your relaxing poem. Best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
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You did a great job with your 575, Sugarray. Goo syllable count per line. Your picture is a great pairing with your words. I enjoyed reading your relaxing poem. Best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 24-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
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Thanks so much Jan!
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Sugarray77, a good entry for the 5-7-5 poetry contest. All syllables are in check to describe the waking of a new day. The air crisp and the birds chirp - just beautiful like the picture you have added to enhance this piece further. Good job and good luck in the competition. ~DD
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
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Sugarray77, a good entry for the 5-7-5 poetry contest. All syllables are in check to describe the waking of a new day. The air crisp and the birds chirp - just beautiful like the picture you have added to enhance this piece further. Good job and good luck in the competition. ~DD
Comment Written 24-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
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Thanks a bunch DD ! I am grateful for your comments.
Comment from judiverse
What lovely artwork to enhance your image of the sunrise. It is a gorgeous picture to wake up to. Nice alliterative sound with misty and morn. Nice detail about the earth slowly awakening. That means there is sufficient time to enjoy the beauty. Great presentation, and best of luck in the contest. judi
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
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What lovely artwork to enhance your image of the sunrise. It is a gorgeous picture to wake up to. Nice alliterative sound with misty and morn. Nice detail about the earth slowly awakening. That means there is sufficient time to enjoy the beauty. Great presentation, and best of luck in the contest. judi
Comment Written 24-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
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Thank you Judi! Have a great day.
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You're very welcome. Seize the day! judi
Comment from donette1914
simply beautiful and you made this come to life
it was an honor to read your talented work
thank you for sharing
this is well penned
I hope for the best in the contest
I like the artwork
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
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simply beautiful and you made this come to life
it was an honor to read your talented work
thank you for sharing
this is well penned
I hope for the best in the contest
I like the artwork
Comment Written 24-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
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Thank you.