Of Sea, Earth and Sky
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "Rain"A collection of poems written in 5-7-5 format.
8 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written three-line poem about the rain that sometimes reminds us of the tears of angels coming down to bring us relief from heat and dust that gathers on the plant leaves.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018
  |
A very well-written three-line poem about the rain that sometimes reminds us of the tears of angels coming down to bring us relief from heat and dust that gathers on the plant leaves.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018
-
Thank you so very much for the stars and comment.
Comment from Boogienights
This is a beautiful short poem. A great subject and I'll bet you can see the tears of an angel..lord knows there is plenty to cry about in this world. A lovely image though, you created with your words. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018
|
This is a beautiful short poem. A great subject and I'll bet you can see the tears of an angel..lord knows there is plenty to cry about in this world. A lovely image though, you created with your words. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018
-
Thank you! Thank you so very much for the stars and the comments.
Comment from Sandra blair
This is a beautiful poem. It puts raindrops in a whole new light. I don't think I'll think about rain the same way I did.
Great imagery.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018
|
This is a beautiful poem. It puts raindrops in a whole new light. I don't think I'll think about rain the same way I did.
Great imagery.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018
-
Thank you. Guess I got the idea from funerals, though it doesn't always rain at them, I just thought that the raindrops were angels crying along with the mourners. Anyway, tgabk you so very much for the stars and lovely comment.
Comment from janalma
What a sweet, splendid idea. Perhaps many of the raindrops are tears. This poem is intriguing and made me pause in my reading thru the entries. Lovely.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018
|
What a sweet, splendid idea. Perhaps many of the raindrops are tears. This poem is intriguing and made me pause in my reading thru the entries. Lovely.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018
-
Thank you. I am very grateful by the rating and the lovely comments.
Comment from Rickie1
Lovely and an excellent picture to go with it. Perfect 5 7 5, well done. I like the idea of tears coming from heaven and cleaning the world of sins and making it pristine again. Thanks
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2018
|
Lovely and an excellent picture to go with it. Perfect 5 7 5, well done. I like the idea of tears coming from heaven and cleaning the world of sins and making it pristine again. Thanks
Comment Written 18-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2018
-
Thank you Rickie1. I appreciate the excellent rating and the comments.
Comment from Dawnya
A technical note: I found the words hard to read because the background and the font are so light. Perhaps you can change that for future readers?
It is an interesting concept, but I hate to think that angels have so much to cry about.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2018
|
A technical note: I found the words hard to read because the background and the font are so light. Perhaps you can change that for future readers?
It is an interesting concept, but I hate to think that angels have so much to cry about.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2018
-
Thank you. Good suggestion. Appreciate the stars.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork.
-The syllable count is good.
-The image of the "falling rain"
is effective and sets the scene.
-The last line is an effective one, as well.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
|
-Nice artwork.
-The syllable count is good.
-The image of the "falling rain"
is effective and sets the scene.
-The last line is an effective one, as well.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
-
Thank you for the excellent rating and all your wonderful comments. They are deeply appreciated.
-
You are welcome.
Comment from Sugarray77
This is a good entry for the contest. Angel tears being raindrops is a new thought for me, but appropriate for the times when we are said and down. Good job on this poem and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
|
This is a good entry for the contest. Angel tears being raindrops is a new thought for me, but appropriate for the times when we are said and down. Good job on this poem and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
-
Thank you for the excellent rating and the great comments. They are greatly appreciated.