Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

A sorrowful write indeed...your implemented style here of the endless questions with which you are left is well-done and invites the reader to participate in your emotional inquiries....

Thank you for sharing! :) :)

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2018

Yvette....
Your to good to me...
Dr Ricky 1024

Comment from Cindy McIntyre

Excellent

This one is really good. It has a lot of compelling and thought-provoking moments. Clock no longer winds and Worn out pockets and leftover sins...those lines really stood out for me!

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2018

Thanks Cindy.
Read it again for the impact of my Editor's Notes.
Dr Ricky 1024.

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Hey Dr Ricky. This is really quite elegant and beautiful. I very much enjoy your imagery of the silenced clock and the flower without a bloom.

Lovely and many thanks to you for sharing.

Gloria

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2018

And thanks for your wonderful review and time Gloria.
Read it again for the up graded Editor's Notes.
Dr Ricky 1024.