Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Hi, Trisha,

Thank you so much for sharing your work with the Advanced Editor. This is a lovely moving picture to enhance the words of your poem.

~patty~

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2018

We?re all works in progress! Thanks for your kind review, patty
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

You did a great job crafting this verse. The descriptive phrases are lovely. I admire your handling of this theme with your colorful phrases. Good job on this poem.

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Sep-2018

Thanks so much for your
Lovely review, hugs, Trisha

Comment from Poetic Friend

Excellent

Wow, this poem is packed with such stunning imagery and innovative personification. You painted a picture of a perfect garden. Thank you for the walk through your garden.

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018

You are very welcome! Thank you for your appreciative review,
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Mark Valentine

Excellent

What a cool image! And what a cool idea for a club. Your words are a wonderful take on the image, using just the right adjectives to capture the many nuanced sights and sounds that nature has to offer - and the reason so many of us love to sit, be still, and revel in its harmonies.

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018

Thank you Mark, for your wonderful review. I?m glad you enjoyed my poem and ekphrastic picture
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written poem about the garden and the wonderful things we can enjoy to watch outside. There are always something to attract the attention and help us to forget our troubles.

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018

I agree, it?s very soothing. Thanks for yiur positive review
Hugs, Trisha