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A Fathers Grieving Heartache.

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My loss of my only son Jason.

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Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Wow...this piece is definitely dark and depressing...almost gives rise to that horrid dream we all have once in a while about being buried alive! And I won't even comment on that awful pic, there, gives me the creeps....

Crossing my fingers that the next one will be less ooky...

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2018

reply by the author on 22-Aug-2018
    Gotcha!
    Dr Ricky 1024.Later today
Comment from Nanny 6
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Your short poem here tells a sad, powerful story of what's happening inside a person's Head during an extremely traumatic event... so sad indeed... thank you for sharing your story...
Judy

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2018

reply by the author on 22-Aug-2018
    Always a pleasure Nan.
    Dr Ricky 1024.Later today
Comment from Pamusart
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Hi Ricky. I am not sure what this is about. Is this about your suicide attempt? Was that before or after your wife died? I am trying to figure out who the she in this poem is. Thank you for sharing

Here I think you meant not

"That is no the Question to You. "

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2018

reply by the author on 22-Aug-2018
    It is basically about the fact that...
    Death is not all there is based on "Gifting Life."
    Through 'Organ-Tissue Awareness.
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