Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

You describe the fickle personality of man and his need for support in times of trouble, and the unconditional comfort that God gives, an uplifting, faithful and honest write, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2018

Thank you very much for your excellent review****kahpot

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Great line up! This is the first I've seen that doesn't try to put one word per line....it is really well presented. That freedom is found in faith....wonderfully stated! :)

Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest! ;)

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2018

Thank you very much for this wonderful review****kahpot

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

You have most perfectly fulfilled the contest requirements, kahpot. It works well without punctuation, although you may want to capitalize He in line two.

just a small typo in your title:
Uconditional (Unconditional)

Great job and best of luck to you in the contest.

Gloria

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2018

Thank you very much and I have corrected, many thanks****kahpot

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

This is a 'God's Love' poetry writing prompt entry rich in Theme and imagery.
It flowed well and read well with no grammar issues as well.
Adjective Content was aligned well with Objective Content and Descriptive Measures aligned.
Descriptive Measures were perfect.
Good luck with this and have a blessed day.
Dr Ricky 1024.

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 Comment Written 18-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2018

Thank you very much for this wonderful and encouraging review****kahpot